Reviews for Awake
HedonismBot chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
I see you're an advocate of the Indoctrination Theory. I wasn't so sure that this could be pulled off, but I must say that you've made me believe that BioWare could realistically pull off that kind of ending. I like you're writing style and you do a good job keeping the characters in character, but still altering them enough that you make them your own version. I think that's the sign of a good writer. I really like this story. Keep up the good work. BioWare should hire you as a writer.

HedonismBot
Addira chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
"It'S habit"

Haha! Good one Vakarian!
dragonlover131313 chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
Hmm interesting. I like where this is going and I really really wish they would have just done something like this in the game in the first place instead of that 'thing' we got. Great writing so far and I look forward to more.
Lightan117 chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
awesome chapter! keep up the great work!
Toyroys chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Wonderful start... this is written so beautiful!
Rogue Nights chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Nooooo! Please, give us more, please this was so touching, i almost cried, i need to know if this shepard wakes up.
Blue Dot77 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
nice job so far
VioletAkuamoebe0396 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
How beautiful!
dannybates chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Looking forward to later chapters :D