|Reviews for Kiss It All Better|
| MJluver777 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Short and beautiful... 3
| StoriUrahara chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
w loved it! Positively awesome! Great job! :D
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| Bringer of Madness chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time 10/10
| Shurely chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Aww! This was bloody brilliant! You're such a good writer - keep it up, seriously!
| Valeria Snape chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
| xJinPhantomas chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
it's really sad, but this is a beautiful love story, still strong along the time( sorry if my voice sounds weird)
| Her Head In the Clouds chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
| lera kim Almaty Kazakstan chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
it is sad... but beautiful
| StrawberryCerealKiller chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
This story is brilliant.
I really love how you convey so much emotion in your words. How the words invoke the reader to feel for Altair and Maria.
Keep on writing stories! It'll be a pity if one like you should stop. :)
| WhyYesIAmAGamerGirl chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
All my tears forever.
This was beautiful. What you did with this is art. Pure art. There needs to be more stories like this. I applaud this - and you - for making me smile, cry, laugh, and despair all at once.
| Imaginarian chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
It's nice that he found the light in the end. Great story- it really got under the surface of the scene in Masyaf, and the memories of how Maria and Altair ended up with each other.
| Celtic Eagle chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
A really beautiful but sad story. You have a good style of writing
| Andrigno chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
a good fic of my favorite AC pairing, i get what you want to tell with this fic, but the fic itself is a bit disorganizated, many bits of past memories here and there, not too much order, but a good fic anyway