|Reviews for Escape|
| Fred chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I get what the story was doing but both Gloria and Lily come off VERY douchy. Gloria WAS insulting James because of who he was, while trying to fight other people doing that. We have a word for people like that and its starts with an H and a Y. Then Lily immediately assumed James disagreed with her because of his blood status, completely ignoring that he could have an well thought out opinion that differed from hers.
The idea that one must have the exact same experiences as someone else or you can't understand ANYTHING around them is one of the most damaging cultural adaptations ever invented and only ends up promoting a culture where the only discussions made are between people who have the same thoughts and experiences with no diversity of thought or opinion.
| jayrambles chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Amazing how you can do all this in a one-shot
| shimmeringbubbles chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Love this. Will you keep going?
| thisismyoverthemoonface chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I positively, absolutely LOVE this story. I've read and reread it about 12 times now. I love how it addresses the difficulties within their relationship, not just the classic "she hated him while he loved her", but the fact that he was a wealthy pureblood and she was a muggleborn and their world was in a war. That had to have caused them issues at some point and I'm so happy you wrote something about it!
| Untiltheveryend7 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
This was beautifully written - as always, and the way you handled politics was fantastic as well. And for some reason, I found the part about James and Lily joining the Order really emotional. Because... you know - that picture, and it would be their last 'job', I suppose.
I have a lot of feelings.
Anyway, fantastic job as always, Bee :)
| RileyMLG chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
This was different and awesome and amazing! You write each different story and scene with such aplomb, such exactitude, it is all so real and feels utterly set in their lives, in their whole story. Love your writing!
| TonksReincarnation chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
This is just so fantastic! Unfortunately, my mind cannot come up with more elaborate and appropriate words for how great this truly is! I clearly don't have the same way with words that you do. I would love to see more stories like this from you in the future (as long as they don't stand in the way of Commentarius, because I'd really like to get a move on with that first).
| Scarlet Natalia chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Perfect. This was super raw and exactly how imagine these two would function together. They're just different enough to work. I loved it! You're absolutely wonderful!
| Mug chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
More of this kind pretty please.
| Mug chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
You're amazing, you know that?
| WhiteCamellia chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
This is fantastic! I hope there's more...? :)
| ReaderMagnifique chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
That was so cute - and yet really sad at the same time!
Is it going to stay a oneshot, or carry on as a longer story?
| Anisha chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
This was brilliant! I loved it... :) can't wait for Commentarious' next chapter!
| anavihs chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
I absolutely ADORED this story! It was SO GOOD! :) It showed that there was a dark side to the war where some stories leave it out. :)
Lots of love