Reviews for The Final Forgiveness
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 9 . 1/18
I like the way you ended it. :) This story was great (I know I've said this before in previous reviews but, it really was)! :D I was curious through the whole thing and, I kept clicking to the next page, wanting to read more. :) By the way, it was really cute and sweet how they were cuddling on the couch like that and, I enjoyed the things they were talking about, lol. I laughed when I read what Severus said about her falling into his arms so easily if he hadn't of said what he did. XD I'm also glad all his hearings seemed to go well and everyone accepted his actions and understood them with open arms, and even professor McGonagall asked if he wanted to continue as Headmaster, wow! (Even though I agree with his choice when he let her have the job because apart from Dumbledore, she's the one who can lead the school best). :D Besides, Severus deserves a break from everything he went through! I can't wait to read your sequel for this! Eep! Super excited! Great job and, thanks again for sharing! This was amazing. :D
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 8 . 1/18
This chapter was totally epic! Oh my gosh! I don't even know how to put it into words right but... when they were all fighting the dark lord together, I was just filled with so much emotion, it was good, so no worries about that! But to be honest, this story has really made me happy, even through the dark parts of it because.. you turned those parts into happy ones. :D And omg! Severus is going to ask Hermione to marry him?! I'm hoping her father says yes and lets him ask her! Because that would be great! On another note, I also really enjoyed reading you having him and Harry try and start over. :) Eep, this story is brilliant! Thanks a ton for writing it and sharing. :')
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 7 . 1/18
Nope, you didn't flop in this chapter! It was great and, so was the love scene between them. :D Most of all, though I'm happy that he remembered the Summer they spent together in the past and yay! The potion worked and Hermione was able to save him before he died! Seriously, that made me VERY happy! :D I hope everything else turns out okay and the two will be able to be together happily after the war is over. :) One more thing.. I liked how you had Severus try and joke with her when he woke up. Haha. That was cute. :)
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 6 . 1/18
This chapter was great! But, also sad. :/ Aww, I hope Hermione's plans work and she can save Severus and.. more importantly, I hope Severus will remember what they had together in the past when he's revived in the future! This story is excellent and, I'm totally in love! :D Also, before I forget, I loved the part when she told him she loved him and their kiss, so cute! :D
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 5 . 1/18
Awww, I loved this chapter! It was really sweet/cute how Severus wanted to protect her and keep her safe from Lucious when he realized that Hermione was scared of him. I'm glad they aren't going, because the way Lucious smirked when he noticed Hermione and Severus holding hands just gave me a bad vibe about the whole thing. XP.. Anyway, great job! :D
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 4 . 1/18
Ooh, Lockhart and Remus and Hagrid showing up in one chapter! Very interesting. :) Even though Lockhart is pretty annoying and, the way Hermione insulted him without him realizing it was clever, though I'm sure it was easy to do with him. XP Lol.. I also like how Hermione stood up for Remus when Lockhart was saying werewolves needed to be killed and were dangerous, the same with the dragon situation and how she stood up for Hagrid that way. :) I really do love this story and, before I forget, it seems that her and Severus are getting closer, now. :).. Great job and thanks for sharing! :D
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 3 . 1/18
Another great chapter! Their conversation was amusing, but also kind of sad in some parts but.. I really liked it when she admitted to him that she admired him, instead of hate him. :) That will help a bunch with his self-hatred, I think! I also like how their both mysterious in their own way, Hermione because she's from the future and Snape because of his past and just how he is and stuff. I love your style of writing and, thanks for sharing! This is a wonderful story. :D
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 2 . 1/18
Lol, I love Dumbledore. He's one of my favorite characters in the series and, I was so bummed when he got killed. XP But yay! I'm glad Hermione seems to be getting better again after the attack and hmm, her relationship with Severus is already getting intense and, I like that! You're also doing really well in keeping them in character and, that's a hard thing to do, I think! At least it is for me. Anyway, another great chapter! Thanks for sharing. :D
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 1 . 1/18
Love this! I can't wait to see what happens next and, Bellatrix needs to go away. XP I hope Hermione will be able to heal from the attack and I can't wait to see what happens between her and Severus. :) Great job and chapter! :D
Perry Downing chapter 6 . 11/5/2014
This is such a beautiful story. Quiet, reserved, perfect. Don't let doubt in, you are a talented writer.
NYCUtopia chapter 7 . 10/17/2014
duj chapter 10 . 9/10/2014
There's always a kernel of truth in Rita's wild lies.
duj chapter 2 . 9/10/2014
You know, the whole no-changing-the-future trope is so anthropocentric. Every breath you take, every move you make changes the world around and inside you at the cellular level, and the micro changes stack up and eventually pass a tipping-point into larger changes. If the beating of a butterfly's wings can start a hurricane at the other end of the world, as chaos theorists suggest, how would it be possible for the addition of a person - or even an object - into a closed-time environment to have no effect?
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 10 . 4/3/2014
This was great! I thought you did an excellent job, and I like how it was not a Maurarder time story, yet she still traveled back in time. Nicely done! :0)
HallowRain8587 chapter 5 . 3/2/2014
Don't stop. SS got the short straw before, his story needs telling and he deserves understanding and love!
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