Reviews for Cinderella
arinovi chapter 13 . 7/13/2013
3 words. : i loved it. Sure, it could use some polishing up, butfor the most part, it was perfect. (I liked how skillfully you captured the charachters and expressed them as the manga did! 3;)
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 13 . 1/29/2013
Yaay for the update. Too bad Aion didn't get any uhm humiliating screen time. After all he made Chrono do and the teasing ect. I think someone needs to set him straight! Same counts for Aion's friends, since they helped Aion in making Chrono's life uhm sucky. This fic has been such a nice fic. Hopefully I'll continue my contribution on Chrono Crusade fanfics and finally will update more... but well when people have multiple fics to work on, this happens and we always try to finish the first one... which needs some... 5 chapters I think... anyway I can't wait for the other story you've been working on. :D
stuckinwonderland420 chapter 13 . 1/28/2013
OMG I DON'T THINK I CAN HANDLE THIS STORY ENDING! ;) *chants* SE-QUEL! SE-QUEL! ONE WITH A JELOUS PRINCESS SATELLA AND MORE CROSS DRESSING! (Or maybe just Satella falling in love with regular Chrono…THAT'S GOOD TOO!) I'm going to miss this fic sooo bad! *sniffs* Please wrte a sequel! LOVED THE CHROSETTE!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 12 . 1/20/2013
Awesome chapter lolz poor Yoshua. Rosette must be happy that she's doesn't need to crossdress. I can't wait for the last chapter!
stuckinwonderland420 chapter 12 . 1/19/2013
*sings while dancing around* KYAAAA! ROSETTE IS GONNA FIND CHROOOONOOO! THERE IS GONNA BE CHROOOOSEEEEEETTE! YAY! :) UPDATE SOOON PLEASE! :)
fruit chapter 12 . 1/18/2013
i love it! i think its really funny how the girls are the dominant ones and that everyone is cross-dressing
varee chapter 11 . 1/7/2013
well, that was.. interesting. though i cannot say you've nailed the essence behind balls - the manners and etiquette, for starters - the genderbending idea has been simply brilliant. I hope the story gets to see its finish for that, too.
cheers,
Varee
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 11 . 12/30/2012
I can't believe I didn't noticed the update sooner. Anyway I really liked this chapter and the kiss scene wasn't that bad in my opinion. Now we only need to wait for Chrono and Rosette's reaction when they find out about each other's gender. XD and Joshua's too.
shiloh chapter 11 . 12/29/2012
I. Need. More! The kiss scene was okay, it just needed more... Uh... Emotion? No that's not it. Passion? Maybe. It just lacked Umph. It seemed like such an important scene yet it didn't stand out as much as it should. I can't find the right word to express what I think it lacks . I am excited to find out what happens next though! I could guess that it'll take sometime before a new chapter is up. So take your time and thank you for the hard work!
stuckinwonderland420 chapter 11 . 12/27/2012
KYAAAAAAA! YAAAAAY! THEY KIIIIIIIIISSED! OMG MY DECEMBER JUST GOT TEN TIMES BETTER AND THAT IS SAYING A LOT CONSIDERING I GOT ALL OF MY TOP THREE THINGS FOR CHRISTMAS! i got almost the complete set of chrono crusade, a lolita (actually i got two of the same so im returning one for YAAAY TWO LOLITAS!) and…TICKETS TO SEE TAYLOR SWIFT IN CONCERT IN MAAAY! XD XD XD XD SOOO HAPPY!

and the kiss scene didnt suck, *frowns in thought* i liked it and it probably could have been written better, but it was still good. probably better then i could do.

UPDATE SOOOOOON!

Poppy :3
Zarina3908 chapter 11 . 12/27/2012
I found the short, sweet kiss preferable to any kind of long, overly dramatic exposition.
stuckinwonderland420 chapter 10 . 11/12/2012
YAAAAAAAAAAAY! U UPDATED REALLY QUICKLY! I liked how pretty much about everybody but "Chrona" and "Joshua" know that their genders aren't all that they appear...or something like that! I can't wait for ur next update, and I'm sure it won't disapoint!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 10 . 11/11/2012
Lolz I love it how nice Rosette and Joshua are to each other. Making fun and laughing at each others when they're in awkward moments. Well I can't wait for more :D.
Zarina3908 chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
Chrona! Do you watch/read Soul Eater?
Guest chapter 9 . 10/27/2012
This chapter wasn't that bad
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