Reviews for A Shadow on the Horizon
Guest chapter 3 . 6/16/2014
wow great story (not)
Raphael chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
great article!saved already
loveghibli chapter 3 . 7/8/2013
Grrrr I was looking forward to reading it
loveghibli chapter 2 . 7/8/2013
I knew it
loveghibli chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
It's his sister the first few paragraphs and I know it's his sister omg its his sister
Narwhale chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
Every story idea has potential, and yours has a lot. Be sure to review and revise your work before publishing. Great story so far
LeeshyLoo chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
Well, that's certainly not good. Another great chapter! Feel proud! I can't wait for an update!
LeeshyLoo chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Are you sure this is your first Princess Mononoke fanfic? 'Cause it's really good! Keep it up! I shall be reviewing every chapter that you update! You kept the characters, well, in character and I like how you change POV's in the chapter!
Shimotsuki no Miko chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Well, for a start, I think it was quite good! The story has a potntial in it!

But, just a piece of advice: better not to put all those points of view in just one chapter; I think it's a little bit confusing and you easily slipped into the general POV... If you want to write in POV-style, I think chapter wise would be a good way of doing it. But then, it's just a suggestion, so it's up to you really...!

But don't give up, as I said, the story has potential in it, so please do carry on!