|Reviews for Titans Together|
| easythrowaway chapter 23 . 3/3
This was a nice way to end it off. I like the choice of using flashbacks to fill in the important parts, and the roller coaster ride was used well too.
| easythrowaway chapter 22 . 3/3
Bringing it full circle and having Zatanna wipe Doctor Light again was a great idea. I really enjoyed that plot point in the comics since it brings about so much conflict. It was also really entertaining to see BeastBoy suffer through the trope of continual interruption. and to see him and Raven stumble over their words trying to gauge how the others feel. Overall the story was fantastic and was easy to connect to emotionally; I enjoyed it immensely.
| easythrowaway chapter 21 . 3/3
I'm glad that Raven only told BeastBoy what really happened, though it's no surprise. Her conversation with Light was indeed badass and you've done a great job of characterizing him as scum, since I hate his guts. I like the addition of a final twist as well, and I have no idea what to expect.
| easythrowaway chapter 16 . 3/2
Red X provided some good comedic value. I'm glad that you were able to scratch the surface of the team's greatest fears and it's great that BeastBoy and Raven have finally admitted their feelings, kinda.
| easythrowaway chapter 12 . 3/2
Aww Raven's opening up again, and it's really cute that they woke up in the position they did. Plus, there's BeastBoy's reflections at the end of the chapter. Good progress on the emotional/relationship front.
| easythrowaway chapter 11 . 3/2
Good job setting up how much of a threat Doctor Light is; I was really on edge while reading through Raven's almost-encounter with him. The lighthearted banter at the end helps balance out the severity of the previous scene and it's definitely very welcome.
| easythrowaway chapter 8 . 3/2
Well now things are out in the open. I really like the use of that dream to expand on Raven's feelings and character. And that sarcastic quip in Raven's head while she was throwing up made me laugh.
| easythrowaway chapter 7 . 3/2
With Robin's quip in the previous chapter about hotels being busy for the holidays, I half expected there to be only one bed in the room or something. The flashbacks were fitting, and I really like how BeastBoy gave Raven the cold shoulder. It'd be cool to see this scene from Raven's POV as well.
| easythrowaway chapter 5 . 3/2
Urgh. Way to cut off that -super important- flashback with real-time stuff. I really love all the emotional tension and turmoil going on, especially since you've made it so easy to sympathize with BeastBoy.
| kathrynmehr chapter 23 . 2/3
And I enjoyed this one just as much! Thank you for the story :)
| Haebris chapter 23 . 1/31
Just finished it, it was very well written and paced. All of your characters were true to the source material in their personality traits and differing vocabularies (apart from where character development took its course). The chapters up until Raven explains why she cut off contact are a master stroke, establishing the two main characters slowly whilst explaining their current predicament with excellent use of flashbacks and current internal monologue. All of this culminates into the reader caring why it happened by the time you find out, if not well before. Then the drama continues to build as they face a 'new' enemy and risk losing what has been established. I wanted to see what would happen during this conflict but I never thought that anything really bad would happen because it wouldn't fit with the tone and it wasn't built up to; this meant that those chapters weren't intense and evoking of huge amounts of emotion but were interesting just because I wanted to see where the plot went. (And of course continued to be well written) Read Breaker if you want to get a handle on what I mean by build up of intensity. I would have liked to see a bit more character interaction with the other members of the team because for example when it said that Cy was Beastboys best friend it seemed like a statement and that it didn't carry much weight; Raven and Beastboy in the the written about parts of the time frame spent a little bit too much time together by themselves. This is getting faved.
| Haebris chapter 2 . 1/28
This is so well written and paced. It's not as intense as "Breaker" but I have a feeling that it may become as addictive. Just finished reading the second chapter.
| ariaamaliana chapter 23 . 12/26/2013
Oh my heart, it is satisfied. The ending made me so happy, thank you.
| Major of the Letztes Bataillon chapter 23 . 11/27/2013
Well I gotta say I'm glad I took my sick day to read this, It's a good little fic a nice mixture of drama and action with an appropriate amount of romance thrown in. If I have one complaint it's that this story dose have a bit of a slow pace and a lot of times I felt like it was dragging but just when I felt like I was getting bored it picked back up but the pacing none the less annoying in how slow it could move. Apart from that little gripe I enjoyed this story plenty I think I'll check out the rest of your work.
| Kodra chapter 23 . 11/4/2013
Just found and finished this fic. It's well worth the read, I loved it. Thanks so much for taking the time to write this excellent piece.
I really enjoyed the developing relationship through the lens of the superheroes conflict. It added the depth that I feel many stories lack, focusing solely on the relationship issues rather than surrounding issues that are likely to gum those up. It came off feeling more real as a result of that hard work.
I'm glad to see you have some extra scenes, so I'll be going through those now. Hope you keep writing.