Reviews for The Tin Man
sisik chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Edward often say he lacks soul, but he dosnt understand that someone without a soul cant feel the emotions and feelings he felt for Bella.

A charming story.

Thanks so much for sharing
texasbella chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Thank you for your submission, I really enjoyed it! :)

MissWinkles chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
What a lovely story. Very bittersweet. It really made me feel for poor Edward, the sentinel. No love, no real life. Very sad. Well done, and good luck in the contest :D
StormDragonfly chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Nice one-shot. :)

The ending reminded me of the Meg Ryan/Nicolas Cage scene in City of Angels.
Lona W. Hall chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Wow! Great story. Loved all the emotion from the "machine." Very original. Please let me know who you are after the contest so I can put you on alert!
primarycolors chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
That was beautiful. He was an angel in that one tiny moment.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
So deep and sad but sweet too thank you
prettyflour chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Loved this! It was tragic yet magical and beautifully written. :)
earthsista chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
This is amazing. 3
rubyred753 chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Interesting story!
SoapyMayhem chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Thanks for entering! That was beautifully written!
Alby Mangroves chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
I'm glad they made a connection, even though it was the most tenuous kind. It would have been awful for him to be so affected, and have absolutely no acknowledgement of his presence. A sad and lovely tale of an invisible sentinel. Thanks for writing!
mmsinful chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
This is my favorite story so far. It is so sad to see how Edward has to see her from afar in a way. He must be so lonely. Great job. Thanks for sharing.