Reviews for The Invisible Girl
inge80 chapter 3 . 4/19/2012
Hi Fleur,

This was a wonderful chapter! I love how open everyone is to Sophie even though she's been looked down at because of her parents. I hate Paul for his angry words and looks. He should get to know her before he can truly hate someone. Doesn't he want Jared to be happy and in love? I don't know, I have a bad feeling about him but hey, a little drama is needed in a good story and I really love this one! You dis a great job here, Fleur... I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Inge :)
inge80 chapter 2 . 4/15/2012
I really don't understand why you only got one review for the two chapters you wrote. I love it so far! I know about this story thanks to twitter and usually I read the vamp stories but I loved the title so I had to read it! Please keep writing! I put you on my alerts list.

Inge :)
Sofie chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Hi :)

It's sad that you haven't gotten any other reviews ... I THINK, that if you made you summary a LITLLE more detailed, about what's going on, then you would spike a LOT of more peoples interest ;)

Anyways, it sounds good, and it's entertaining, so i like it ..

So far ... :o ;) :P :D

Good luck with the writing! :D ;) :P

Sofie ...