Reviews for Destiny Lost
Guest chapter 22 . 12/10/2015
Very good book very I was at the edge of my seat every time love it and I pray to god I hope to see more of your works cause u got serious talent
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 20 . 4/3/2015
Man... really, why? You should NOT have demonized Yamcha like that... He's loyal to a fault and yes, he's a coward many times, but he'd never turn his friends in for the Universe. Other than that, my interest is highly piqued... DIE FRIEZA AND DODORIA, YOU SOBs!
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 18 . 4/3/2015
Oh come on, really? Villainizing Yamcha to that level is just plain stupid... He'd never do something like that... Mild Yamcha bashing makes sense, but him betraying Bulma and taking satisfaction in the idea of Frieza torturing her is just completely OOC and idiotic... Yamcha may be an asshole and he pisses me off a lot of the time, but he is generally a nice guy...
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 15 . 4/2/2015
No! Why?!
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 14 . 4/2/2015
I don't get it... Why not just fly up and start firing Ki blasts at the beasts from the air.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 13 . 4/2/2015
What the? How did Bulma get in Frieza's ship?
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 12 . 4/2/2015
Really? Make her climax in the middle of a party? Wow...
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 11 . 4/1/2015
I bet Yamcha's girlfriend Dory/Doris will turn out to be the traitor within... Just a prediction.

BTW, wasn't Alina the name of Vegeta's mother in this story?
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 8 . 4/1/2015
LOL Yeah... I hated the idea of Vegeta taking another woman too... For some reason, my stomach twists whenever I think of B/V with anyone but each other...
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 7 . 4/1/2015
It's really out of character to have Goku ogling at other females... That's definitely not something he does.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 5 . 4/1/2015
Boy, Yamcha's a real dick in this story...
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 3 . 4/1/2015
God... Is this DBZ or star wars? LOL
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 2 . 4/1/2015
Oh no!
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
Not a big fan of King Vegeta, but come on... The guy's not that much of an asshole... I hate the fact that he gave Vegeta away to Frieza, but the fact was that he was extremely reluctant in doing so and died trying to rescue him, so he shouldn't be demonized that much.

But I will agree that it was morally repugnant on his part, plus he could've sent his son away somewhere and faked his death or something like that, anything to prevent Frieza from getting him.
Spellweaver10 chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Great prologue. I am sure this will be an amazing journey
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