Reviews for Destiny Lost
AlxaDelta chapter 3 . 12/28/2016
isn't vegeta short noe that i remember
Mira D. Blackjack chapter 22 . 5/16/2016
Omg. Omg. You're the best author_san.. This us brilliant. INDEED..! I love you..
marveling chapter 22 . 2/20/2016
That was a very nice one. You did a great job with the plot. I especially loved your developmenf of Bulmas and Vegetas relationship. Plus, both of them are extremely well pictured. Yamcha however - and I'm sorry to annoy you - was totally out of character, but hey: your story, right?;-) What I would suggest anyways is a proofreading, because there are a lot of mistakes, even for a non english fellow as I, which at times makes the experience a bit bumpy. And that's really a pity, because otherwise your story is pretty damned good. Keep up the creative work!
Guest chapter 22 . 12/10/2015
Very good book very I was at the edge of my seat every time love it and I pray to god I hope to see more of your works cause u got serious talent
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 20 . 4/3/2015
Man... really, why? You should NOT have demonized Yamcha like that... He's loyal to a fault and yes, he's a coward many times, but he'd never turn his friends in for the Universe. Other than that, my interest is highly piqued... DIE FRIEZA AND DODORIA, YOU SOBs!
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 18 . 4/3/2015
Oh come on, really? Villainizing Yamcha to that level is just plain stupid... He'd never do something like that... Mild Yamcha bashing makes sense, but him betraying Bulma and taking satisfaction in the idea of Frieza torturing her is just completely OOC and idiotic... Yamcha may be an asshole and he pisses me off a lot of the time, but he is generally a nice guy...
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 15 . 4/2/2015
No! Why?!
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 14 . 4/2/2015
I don't get it... Why not just fly up and start firing Ki blasts at the beasts from the air.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 13 . 4/2/2015
What the? How did Bulma get in Frieza's ship?
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 12 . 4/2/2015
Really? Make her climax in the middle of a party? Wow...
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 11 . 4/1/2015
I bet Yamcha's girlfriend Dory/Doris will turn out to be the traitor within... Just a prediction.

BTW, wasn't Alina the name of Vegeta's mother in this story?
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 8 . 4/1/2015
LOL Yeah... I hated the idea of Vegeta taking another woman too... For some reason, my stomach twists whenever I think of B/V with anyone but each other...
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 7 . 4/1/2015
It's really out of character to have Goku ogling at other females... That's definitely not something he does.
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 5 . 4/1/2015
Boy, Yamcha's a real dick in this story...
SaiyanPrince541 chapter 3 . 4/1/2015
God... Is this DBZ or star wars? LOL
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