|Reviews for Evidence|
| Dr.Horrible-Billy-Buddy chapter 1 . 1/22
DUDE WTF YOU SO DIDNT TELL ME AHOUT THIS I FOUND IT. searouslyyyyyyy do you know how hard it is to find stuff like this? Yes you do...and especially after we talked when you were last hom e that we shared the same fascination with the human heart and anatomy you STILL didn't tell me about this!? BLUG MAN! Brofluff/angst/curdles is my favorite thing! Ug… anyway...I'm going to try it. The heartbeat thing...I do have school in the morning Hah.
Any OTHER fanfiction I should know about? Hmmm?
| yay chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
That is an adorable bromance moment.
| 302pilot chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Lovely, just lovely. I don't think it was out of character at all. Sherlock can be very literal in his thinking and what he did was very logical-he gave John solid, undeniable proof that he was alive. John had seen him die-his eyes were deceived so now his Brain didn't believe what he saw. But Sherlock proved his presence with something that couldn't be faked. Mmmmmm. Warm fuzzies abound. Thanks for that!
| MoffandAvencore chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
I love how you showed the strong relationship between them without going into the messy world of slash. I love this!
| doctorjay chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Pretty much OOC, but that's okay. ;)
| livingintomorrow chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
a little ooc but still adorable!
| hjohn302 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
I don't think this was too OOC. I really like it. A lot. The timid way Sherlock comes in, and how John tries to be strong...
"What am I supposed to do, Sherlock?" He asked, voice cracking finally, his shell breaking way to the raw hurt. "What do you want me to do?"
Really love that line - about his shell breaking way... So good.
| tabbiecat chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Hi, I thought it was great. :) Yay for bromance! Thanks, Tabbiecatx
| Lady Sam Mallory chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I know you said at the bottom that John would be clingy, but I like that you show his strength. I love that Sherlock helps him to do that- still be strong, but admit that he needs Sherlock's help to get past this horrific time in his life. Very well written and I will be forced to add this to one of my favorite stories.
| TheShadowArchitect chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
I thought you *sob* said this *sob* was f-fluffy :)
I liked how you juxtaposed the recording with Sherlock's actual heartbeat. About what you said at the beginning: being comforted by, or even being fascinated with the beating of a fellow heart is nothing to be embarrassed about. It's an instinct and very natural for humans. We're drawn to it because our own unique heartbeat is a very personal thing. Listening to our own helps us be more in touch with who we are, while listening to or sharing someone else's is a very intimate way of bonding.
| Sierra Janeway chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
I adore this story. I keep reading it for all the comforty feels. Love it. You do great things with this imagery.
| Amaya Ramiel chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Ah, very lovely story. I don't think its ooc at all, it's very well done.