Reviews for Cause Voldie You Split Your Soul
LadySarahj chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME! I AM SENDING IT TO ALL MY FRIENDS!
Queen Riza chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
HAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA OH I LOVED THIS! IT WAS HILARIOUS!
roxyxsmith chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Very nice. Good fun to read and very different x
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Dear otter:

This is just sad. I'll grant you that the rhyme scheme in "Firework" wasn't exactly Spenserian, but at least it had a vague sort of assonance throughout. In what sense does "spilt" (or "split", which is what I think you really meant) sound like "again" - or "soul" like "evil" - or "ha" like "dead"? ("Love" and "mom", on the other hand, might work if you changed the latter word to "mum", which is the word the books themselves use, anyway.)

Sincerely,

Qoheleth