|Reviews for Streetcleaners|
| Witch of Frost chapter 3 . 4/4/2012
Sorrry didn't review earlier... But anyways, another GOOD chapter. :) Keep it up! :D
| KNDnumber170 chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
Awesome chapter, I knew it could only get better since i'm pretty sure its impossible to make this a bad story.
Good job on Emma by the way, that's exactly how she is.
| YouMeAtJess chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
Omg awesome :') I freakin love this :L
| april upside down chapter 3 . 3/27/2012
so hey there [:
i think apriley is a nice change of pace.
so long as alice doesnt try to steal him away from april.
that would just be absurd.
oh and i forgot to mention, you captured this pretty well but, april's knife throwing ability is the equialent to clove's in the hunger games.
and clove is beast. she ranked a 10 on a scale of 1-12 rating her ability of knife throwing. the only person who scored higher than her was everdeen. and she shot an arrow at the gamemakers. so. yeah.
| Witch of Frost chapter 2 . 3/25/2012
Really like it so far! :D
I personally think they should train to survive first. So maybe the group get to see each persons show of skills. Can't wait. :)
| YouMeAtJess chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
Ugh scratch that, could you change Alice's age to 16 please? :)
| YouMeAtJess chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Appearance: Alice has bubblegum pink hair which is back combed to the point of no return, she normally wears in bunches. She has large light blue eyes that some people mistake for grey with extremely pale skin. She's short in height and quite thin.
Personality: To make up for her lack of heigh she has a large temper and it's easy to set her off. Her friends have compared her to a time bomb, joking that it's only a matter of time before she blows up in your face. She enjoys annoying and winding people up and get's a sadistic satisfaction from breaking people down. She does however have a soft side, and has been known at times to breakdown, not that she lets anyone see her like that. She is also fiercely loyal to her friends and would rather be tortured and killed then betray them.
Casual wear: alice_casual_wear/set?id45981859
Hunting/night wear: alice_night_wear_hunting/set?id45982058
Formal wear: alice_formal_wear/set?id45982528
Weapon of choice: She likes to use knives, either that or just her bare fists.
Strengths: Hand to hand combat and persuasion (most likely aggressive persuasion.)
Weaknesses: She doesn't get along with very many people, so she can't be sympathetic. She has a cold and unforgiving personality that makes her often unlike able.
Crush/BF or GF: If you look on my Sector E fanfic, she has a crush on her best friend Alex.
Enemies: Most people, you can choose.
Friends: Not many, maybe 1 or 2, once again you can choose.
Team or alone: Alone for a while them maybe team up?
Special item they carry: A picture of her baby brother who was comatosed.
Anything else I missed: She has an older brother who she hates called Oli.
| KNDnumber170 chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
Nice, i like emma in this chapter. Keep up the good work!
| april upside down chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
IT WAS AMAZING!
Training, please. Lets show off some skills!
And thank you for reviewing. It made me very happy!
| Witch of Frost chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Name: Roxanne Griffith (nickname: Roxy)
Age: (lets try to have a varity or at the the same age): 12
Appearance: Roxy has long mid-back, ginger hair in two loose fishtail braids, which she fiddles with when she's bored. Her piercing green eyes which are framed with thin eyelashes. Her teeth which have 4 fillings and violet braces lining her teeth. Her skin is pale and doesn't tan, no matter how hot it is. it just burns. But that doesn't faze her, her height is at a 5'4".
Personality: sly, sarcastic and sneaky. Roxy can make sarcastic comments to about anything that you say. She is a known troublemaker, but her sneaky self slithers her out of the mess. She is a very good stealer, and can steal something without you even realizing. But, she gives it back... eventually.
Casual wear: Roxy usually wears a black shirt with a short sleeve violet hoodie(not zipped). And a pair of denim shorts and combat boots.
Hunting/night wear: At night she wears, a shirt that says, "YUM! BLOOD!" with a vampire doing a happy dance with a bottle of blood in hand,and grey sweatpants. Her hunting wear is a brown jacket and an blackshirt with olive cargo pants tucked in a pair of brown hunting boots.
Formal wear: she wears a sleeveless turquoise blue dress that falls till her knees and brown knee hie boots. And her hairs down.
Weapon of choice: (Can be anything really, from knives to guns to whatever) Spear. She enjoys flinging them through the air.
Strengths: She is a good reader and playing her instrument,the saxophone.
Weaknesses: (Because nobody can be perfect... can't be something really small either, something somebody else can use against another to make it interesting) She can be a worrywart, even though she is fighting to get that trait away from her.
Crush/BF or GF: It is known she has a crush... but nobody knows who... ( you can decide... if you want)
Enemies:Due to her stealing problem, she has made a few enemies: such as 86 and the teen ninjas.
Friends: Not many people exactly like her, so she is not so sure who her friends are.
Team or alone: Team. She can work alone, but she rathers a team due to the fact she is a kleptomaniac and she needs to fulfill that thirst.
Special item they carry: a pocket watch that was her grandpa's who died in a plane crash.
Anything else I missed: She likes Pokemon cards and collects them.
| april upside down chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Name: April Dickson (of course mi amor!)
Age: (let’s try to have a variety or at the same age) However old Riley and David are. I do trust you’ll have them in this.
Appearance: April is described as a very pretty girl, which she strongly believes is an exaggeration. She has buttery blond curls, which are often untamable and she usually wears up in a high ponytail, Tiffany box blue eyes framed by her dark eyelashes, and "iPod-white, never-needed-braces" teeth. Everything is beautiful about her, even her pillowy full lips and glowy flawless skin, but she sees none of it. April has a thin, dancer's build, which graceful long legs, toned claves and nice abs. She stands at a petite height at 5'0. April is almost never seen not smiling and makes lots of faces at people, sometimes funny faces, sometimes devilish faces to match her vocal pitch changes. April's twin, Hannah, often bullied April into feeling self-conscious when they were younger, a habit she has since grown out of.
Personality: April is a somewhat forceful, independent girl who often knew her own mind. She has an energetic, lively personality. April has a bit of a temper and is also very loyal to those she trusts and respects, as she is willing to risk her life to protect them. April is quite rebellious, independent, sarcastic and carefree. Unlike one of her brothers, Jake , who tends to hold his tongue in certain situations, April speaks her mind without euphemism or without care that her opinions might hurt other people's feelings. Not only does April show her rebellious nature freely, but she encourage it in her friends as well. April is also very good at imitating the mannerisms of others very accurately much to the amusement of those around her. Growing up being the middle child of 7 toughened her up, and April is, for the most part, not afraid to stand up to anybody, friends and enemies alike. Also, she could be harsh towards those whom she disliked. April is a very popular at her school, she is the life of parties and is fancied by many boys. Her brothers, Chad and Jake often thought that she was too popular for her own good. She was also known to be quick-witted and funny and could often make others laugh even when they were feeling down. April is also good at lying and capable of being opaque when necessary. April is a somewhat silly and sentimental girl, though she is also brave. She was lively and loved to be the center of attention, but tended to react in an extreme way to everyday situations. April is a big flirt and often uses her charming charisma to her advantage around boys and can be very playful with boys, even if she doesn't truly like them.
Casual wear: April is known to have a fashion all her own. She’s a fan of bright colored skinny jeans and denim short shorts. She also adores graphic t-shirts and jumpers. One of her favorite outfits consists of reddish-coralish shorts, blue keds and a navy blue and white striped sailor jumper. When it’s colder, she’ll exchange the shorts for the same color of skinny jeans and rock and roll (:
Hunting/night wear: Her night wear when its cold is yoga pants and her cheer sweatshirt with “Sunshine” printed on the back. When it’s warmer she wears soffe shorts and a teal jog bra. For hunting she usually wears simple tawny trousers, a light green shirt, sturdy brown belt, and thin, hooded black jacket that falls down to her thighs. She also wears boots made of soft leather with a narrow, flexible rubber sole.
Formal wear: .
Weapon of choice: (Can be anything really, from knives to guns to whatever) Knives! She’s an expert knife thrower!
Strengths: Stealth, strength, speed
Weaknesses: (Because nobody can be perfect... can't be something really small either, something somebody else can use against another to make it interesting) she’s not the smartest, most empathetic or calmest
Crush/BF or GF: let’s shake it up a little. Riley Berenson.
Enemies: Chad Dickson, Cree Lincoln, Olivia and her clones.
Friends: Riley and David have been her best friends since birth and she’s with them ALL the time. Whether they like it or not. Heh heh.
Team or alone: TEAM! With the Berensons. Whether they like it. OR NOT.
Special item they carry: A locket with a picture of Jake on one side and Riley on the other. But he doesn’t ever let ANYONE see it.
Anything else I missed: Hmm. Not really. And you kinda know april so . . .
OH AND DUDE. I updated One Small Step. SO GET A MOVE ON IT AND REVIEW. That is all.
| KNDnumber170 chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Name: Emma Wilkins
Age: same age as numbuh 2 exactly
Apperance: Long straight brown hair and green eyes
Personality: Nerdy but hides it, accadentally says smart things and then covers them up. Nice but also has a big mouth and can barely keep secrets. One of Kuki and Wally's best friends and Patton's step sister
Casual Wear: Blue tee with blue jeans and black ballet flats and navey blue stud earrings. If its could a tan jacket over it all.
Hunting/Night Wear: PJs are a yellow tank with sweats and hunting would probably be a yellow tee with jeans and hiking boots and a green baseball cap.
Formal Wear: A lime green dress, strapless, and sparkely, with white strappy heels
Weapon Of Choice: Probably a small handgun she got from her dad to protect herself with, she can't really use any other weapons cause she sucks at it but she can fight. The gun is a 9mm but she always forgets and Patton has to remind her.
Strengths: Thinking and coming up with plans, she is alot like Hoagie and remembers everything she reads or hears. She can also identify every type of wildlife, plantlife, and rocklife.
Weaknesses: Fighting and telling the truth, she also gets really nervous and is clumsy.
Crush: The leader of the Roudy Hooligans From Across The Square but you don't have to put them in. She thinks Wally's cute but respects Kuki enough that she leaves him alone.
Enemies: Fanny hates her cause of her friendship with numbuh 14 and Lizzie
Friends: Her best friend is numbuh 14 from sector T but Lizzie and her are also friends and so are numbuh 4 and 3
Team or Alone: Team, she'd die alone
Special Item to carry: A locket always around her neck with a picture of her mother (who looks exactly like Kuki)
Anything else I missed: She can die but Patton and who ever else of his siblings you use need to ne extreamly sad, so do Kuki and Wally.