|Reviews for Capital Vices|
| Samhopelove chapter 8 . 5/4/2012
I loved it!:) Could you do Trixie/Dan! they are my favorite couple and not many people write them:( other couples you could do Jim/Hallie,Diana/Brian,Honey/Tad? I don't really mind as long as Trixie/Dan get together:)Cant wait!:)(for what ever story you do, cause frankly on there arent that many trixie belden stories in General lol:D
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/17/2012
Hey thanks for the great epilogue, I liked the way you wrapped it up. I DO hope you write more soon, cos I like your alternative and original takes on the characters, I love reading something different, so please don't leave it too long. I liked the positive ending. And I liked that it was Mart. Thankyou
| Sam chapter 7 . 4/15/2012
INteresting:) i was hoping Trixie and Dan would get together and help each other to overcome there flaws:( oh well interested what you are going to do next:) just plz dont let Jim and Trixie get together in the end-_-
| Daughterof8 chapter 7 . 4/15/2012
I really liked this next chapter. I have to admit I was surprised when Dan was the one BWG who overcame his flaw and had a nice ending. You would have thought it'd have been one of the others, but I guess that's just how this story will go - the opposite of what you expect :) Nice chapter, and good luck with figuring out where to go next! I can't wait!
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/10/2012
Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed, but I definitely think you should continue- this is a cool story and alternative take on the series, and I am really enjoying it, because it is sooo different. Please do post more, I am keen to see the next chapter, and especially then where you take it from there.
Yes, clever on the teachers... And clever finding the appropriate vices for each bobwhite. I was kinda half imagining that perhaps it would turn out to be jim's school, though his would be a different vice...
Good work, I really like it - please do publish more soon. It's great to read something so different
| Daughterof8 chapter 6 . 4/10/2012
This is...I don't know. I can't say that I love it (I'm a total traditionalist, and I do prefer happier stories), but I am extremely curious about where you're going with this. The next chapter will probably be about Dan, but after that...yeah, I'm really curious. Write fast!
| Allykat chapter 2 . 3/31/2012
Interesting. I like what you're doing with the story. Looking forward to more chapters.
| ps9906 chapter 2 . 3/29/2012
I rather like this unusual look at the BWG's. I am looking forward to more!
| macyrose chapter 2 . 3/26/2012
An interesting take on the BWGs. I look forward to reading more so I hope you update soon.