Reviews for Within the Apocalypse
YeTianshi chapter 1 . 7/22
Ok, so I'm going to have to point this out. Naruto has the Rinnegan, his ridiculous reserves of chakra, and destructive jutsu that could lay waste to quite a bit of land. How is that not god-like?
Don't get me wrong, I love OP and Godlike characters, but your statement just made me wonder.
PaperbackAlloy chapter 25 . 7/1
Please update soon I'm sad it hasn't been updated
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23
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0Shard0 chapter 6 . 4/11
I'm sorry to hear that but it's not my place to say, coming from a stranger and all.
0Shard0 chapter 4 . 4/11
Since there is the acid spitter and the tank I'm assuming most zombies that aren't the usual 'walkers' like in "The Walking Dead" are going to be based off of "Left 4 Dead" or something like that.
0Shard0 chapter 2 . 4/11
Thanks for the story suggestion.
blhuez08 chapter 2 . 4/1
Stopped reading at chapter two. He got injured? really?
MyPillow chapter 16 . 3/7
I know the time has passed but I think I would really like a harem :D I fucking love harems
Silver566 chapter 2 . 1/22
Tsunoda...really you thought you could do that.. wow
Tenma Sosei chapter 25 . 10/17/2016
I really hope you add Rei with Naruto.
BuHuu chapter 16 . 8/31/2016
Please, like Tsunachi777 said, no harem in this is story. I mean, what is the big idea behind these harem stories? I don't get it and I really begin to despise harem stories. I admit, there are a few good harem stories, but most of the naruto crossover fictions are total unrealistic harems.

One woman, okay. Two woman, still okay. Three woman, maybe. But really, more than three woman is really unrealistic for me. But why want alw
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
I'm sure you've heard this before, it was ENTIRELY UNNECESSARY to give Naruto the Rinnegan and the awesome powers that go with it! And based on what little of his character and past that we've seen here, it would've been just been better to replace Naruto with Sasuke. Such a cold-hearted mentality and reaction would've fit the Uchiha SO MUCH BETTER than Naruto!

Naruto would've done just fine with only his 'normal' powers and abilities. As they say: in the land of the blind, the one-eyed man is king. And Naruto is a fully-powered, experienced badass ninja in a world that has never known or seen the capabilities of chakra!

But I guess that complaint's moot and you'll just disregard it afterwards. If nothing else, I will say that you've done a remarkable job writing the story thus far. I just hope that you'll do something different and steer somewhat away from canon, make your OWN version of the series. In opinion, when it comes to crossovers of this nature, canon is a GUIDE to what could've been. It is something which you can use for references and ideas, but don't be afraid to take a 'left' turn instead of the 'right' that canon.

So, excluding my complaint, it's promising and pretty long. I'll definitely check out the next few chapters!
Addictorator chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
By the first chapter, and all I see is blatant plagiarism.

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"The dead lunged at the blonde, but he ended up stabbing the rod through the head of one. The others grabbed onto the blonde, "Shinra Tensei."He muttered quietly. Only the boy on his shoulders would have effectively heard it. It was then that the six creatures that had come to surround the two were viciously blown back. This wasn't the 'please move from the doorway'Shinra Tensei as he liked to call it, such as the one he used earlier against the abomination in the school. This was a full-fledged, bone crushing, organ melting forceful push that was used for combat.

The creatures rocketed off in all directions, the amount of force shown to all of the onlookers as over in the bus. One of the monsters had propelled right into the school. One of them ended up slamming hard against the constructed walls, impacting with enough force to make an actual crater in it. Another creature blew off in another direction, rocketing at the fence before spring boarding face first crashing into the cement."

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I quoted that from your first chapter. Now observe this excerpt from Chapter 3 of Forward unto Dawn by Bleedndreamz.

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"Shinra Tensei." He muttered quietly. Only the boy on his shoulders would have effectively heard it. It was then that the six creatures that had come to surround the two were viciously blown back. This wasn't the 'please move from the doorway' Shinra Tensei as he liked to call it, such as the one he used earlier against the abomination in the school. This was a full fledged, bone crushing, organ melting forceful push that was used for combat.

The creatures rocketed off in all directions, the amount of force shown to all of the onlookers as over in the bus. One of the monsters had propelled right into the school. His body slamming hard against the contructed walls, impacting with enough force to make an actual crater in it. A feeling he knew far too well from his battle with Pein. Another creature blew off in another direction, rocketing at the fence before spring boarding face first harshing into the cement."

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You seem to have corrected a few of Bleedndreamz' spelling mistakes such as "contructed" (constructed) and "harshing" (crashing), not to mention adding a few phrases here and there, which leads me to believe you were the one who copied from his fanfic, since nobody would intentionally create spelling mistakes that were previously not there. Blatant plagiarism like this and riding on the works of others, frankly, disgusts me. Reported.
animecutylover chapter 8 . 7/6/2016
The bastard!
animecutylover chapter 7 . 7/6/2016
Omg!

That bitch/bastard!
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