Reviews for Mismatched
DarkangeABBY chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
... i can't really see harry say quick fuck ... but i really like the ending about going slow (which really fits in this story) :)
DarkangeABBY chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
omj was she really going to say that out loud O.O u go girl lol
Guest chapter 8 . 7/18/2012
awwww i loved this soo much
Priestess of Silvanus chapter 8 . 7/17/2012
very cute
Draco mudiliar chapter 8 . 6/13/2012
hahaa! it was very funny - Harry and draco getting caught by McGonagall.

good work
Sheri Contrary chapter 8 . 6/12/2012
Damn it! The last chapter's review posted before I was ready. SO annoying!

Okay...CHAPTER 7 continued. Lol. McGonagall's reaction is so classically McGonagall! Brilliant!

Well YAY! Ron's on board too. I'm so happy you didn't make Ron unreasonably angry. *sighs with relief* Quick meltdown from Ron, then it was over. Yay!

And more McGonagall. Hehe.

CHAPTER 8

OMG! Not McGonagall AGAIN? *giggles hysterically*

Anyway...that was very nice! Quite a few issues that could easily be straightened out (I didn't mention them all), but thanks for posting it...it was fun to read. Write on!
Sheri Contrary chapter 7 . 6/12/2012
GO Ginny! It's refreshing to see Ginny NOT getting bashed! Thank you!

Lol. McGonnag
Sheri Contrary chapter 6 . 6/12/2012
You've got some awkward sentences...word order and verb tense.

Burrow is another word that should always be capitalized.

Loved Draco's "Take a fucking picture why don't you. It lasts longer." Hehe.

Ron watched his sister get up and walk away before turning to Dean, "she's my baby sister, break her heart and I break your legs." he warned his friend and left Dean sitting there looking a bit stunned as he followed his sister. ***** Sheesh, I have four brothers (2 older, 1 my age, and 1 younger) and NONE of them are that protective...probably because I'm perfectly able to take care of myself and...also because I'd kick their arses if they behaved like barbarians. Lol.

Next issue...same paragraph (as above)...some corrections:

Ron watched his sister get up and walk away before turning to Dean. "She's my baby sister, break her heart and I break your legs," he warned his friend and left Dean sitting there looking a bit stunned as he followed his sister.
Sheri Contrary chapter 5 . 6/12/2012
I'm confused...Draco said that Blaise and Theo (and Pansy) already knew about him and Harry. *frown* Love that Neville says they can't tell...sweet, sweet Neville!

Possessive Draco is funny!

Pansy's reaction was GREAT!
Sheri Contrary chapter 4 . 6/12/2012
Love all the sneaking around. I hope their bed didn't bang into the wall and alert Ron and Seamus. Hehe.
Sheri Contrary chapter 3 . 6/12/2012
That telling them (Ron and Hermione) the truth bit was hilarious! Hehe.

The word Muggle should always be capitalized...and the same goes for a lot of JKR's words.

Love, love, LOVE what you're doing with Harry and Ginny...she's a great "fag hag." *giggle* And, hysterical that Draco overheard them talking about his...you know.
Sheri Contrary chapter 2 . 6/12/2012
Good reintroduction scene. So nice that they could actually say what they mean. *grin*

And I'm pleased that Draco's friends know about this...at least he has a few people to talk to...unlike Harry, who only has Ginny. I hope Hermione will be reasonable when she finds out...and Ron. *fingers crossed*
Sheri Contrary chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Ginny speaking: "Mum said you WERE (not was) feeding the chickens and that I was to come and help you."

Same trouble here...Ron speaking: "I saw you. Why WERE (not was) you talking to ferret?"

I was...

You were...

He/she/it was...

We were...

They were...

You seem to have it right in some places, but not others.

Is this going to be one of those fics where Ron's an unreasonable arse? *sigh* Merlin, I hate that. Still going to give it a go though.

You've got some punctuation issues (missing), but all in all, I'm still enjoying the storyline. ) And, I just LOVE the conversation between Harry and Ginny down at their end of the table. *giggles*
ryouXichigo-lover chapter 8 . 4/23/2012
:) love it
messyhxdlovers chapter 8 . 4/12/2012
this story made me NAWWWW the whole way through. i loved it!
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