Reviews for Mismatched
Sheri Contrary chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Ginny speaking: "Mum said you WERE (not was) feeding the chickens and that I was to come and help you."

Same trouble here...Ron speaking: "I saw you. Why WERE (not was) you talking to ferret?"

I was...

You were...

He/she/it was...

We were...

They were...

You seem to have it right in some places, but not others.

Is this going to be one of those fics where Ron's an unreasonable arse? *sigh* Merlin, I hate that. Still going to give it a go though.

You've got some punctuation issues (missing), but all in all, I'm still enjoying the storyline. ) And, I just LOVE the conversation between Harry and Ginny down at their end of the table. *giggles*
moomoomoores chapter 8 . 4/23/2012
:) love it
messyhxdlovers chapter 8 . 4/12/2012
this story made me NAWWWW the whole way through. i loved it!
Lady DestinyHope chapter 8 . 4/10/2012
Aww, a cute story that I enjoyed reading very much!
Lady DestinyHope chapter 7 . 4/10/2012
LOL, that was hilarious!
musme chapter 8 . 4/4/2012
nice and fun

I like it
Gleek263 chapter 8 . 3/28/2012
I loved it! It took me all day to read because I had things to do in between, but I wanted to finish it before I went to bed. It was so cute! I really wanted to read about that howler though haha. Keep up the great work xD
Srienia chapter 8 . 3/27/2012
The story was very good and provided quite a few laughs. Especially that McGonnagal's run ins with them kept escalating
foxgodess07 chapter 8 . 3/26/2012
that was a good story. i enjoyed it alot.
A.L. Cullen chapter 8 . 3/26/2012
What do I think? It's BLOODY BRILLIANT :D Great job as always :D
writing in the rain chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Well, I'd like to stat by saying I like both your writing style and your plot idea. Its a very unique idea, and that makes it all the better to read.

But I wouldn't be myself if I didn't mention your lack of comma usage and your varying issues with subject verb agreement and also a bit of verb tense agreement.

Have you ever considered going back and editing this story? Or getting someone else to do it for you, it wouldn't be hard and it could greatly improve the story and make it easier to read.

Its just a thought.

But like I said, I really do love this idea and what I've read so far is very good.
Pri-Chan 1410 chapter 8 . 3/26/2012
It was a great fic!

Draco and Harry are so cute toguether xDD
marksmom chapter 8 . 3/26/2012
This story was excellent! I loved that Ron asked...even thought he really shouldn't have! Kudos...this one's going on my favourites!
Cathcer1984 chapter 8 . 3/26/2012
Beautiful ending for a beautiful fic :)
Canadian-23 chapter 8 . 3/26/2012
Hey amazing!

Wow! Perfect ending to an aswome story! Love it and Ron is sooo my favorite! I really love him :) so amazing work and I can't wait to see your next story! You are wonderful!
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