Reviews for Not Your Type
softprongs chapter 11 . 6/5
i hate the angsts so much but i cant help but continue reading!
iamalphagirl chapter 36 . 3/5
This will always be one of the most beautiful stories about Jacob and Bella. Thank you for making this!
Novel's addict chapter 36 . 2/16
I am so incredibly happy that i stumbled upon this story. . You have no idea how long i was searching for such a plot and you didn't disappoint. It is amazing and mind blowing, i loved every piece of it. Thank you for sharing this story with us
mjdolan chapter 33 . 6/19/2016
Holy shit THIS SCENE!
mjdolan chapter 30 . 6/19/2016
Wasn't expecting that plot twist! I like it I like it.
mjdolan chapter 23 . 6/19/2016
loved the heating up of it. It was like a wave that lifts you up.
mjdolan chapter 21 . 6/19/2016
Love love love the sweetness!
mjdolan chapter 20 . 6/19/2016
That was an interesting turn of events. It feels like a sharp plot turn so the rest of the story, Jacob and Bella can get together. I can see how the seeds may have been sewn for future conflict though...
mjdolan chapter 16 . 6/19/2016
I liked your dialogue with Bella and Edward, believable but not extreme. Nice tie in with his last living relatives. I didn't see it, but it was well foreshadowed.
mjdolan chapter 15 . 6/19/2016
Nooooo video capture can't lead to anything good!
I notices Jacobs POV chapters are way more expository. I wonder if they could have been done just in 3rd person with a focus on him. It undermines your voice with Bella.
mjdolan chapter 14 . 6/19/2016
mjdolan chapter 12 . 6/19/2016
I was so surprised you had her give it up to Josh! Really thought that would be drawn out. The stitches was a great surprise though!
mjdolan chapter 11 . 6/19/2016
Love your Leah and all there interactions. Introducing that point through paul made sense. The last bit could have been drawn out more for more impact on his sudden, hot-breath arrival. But still chilling... or should i say, steaming...
mjdolan chapter 10 . 6/19/2016
Again love the characterization. I've always like Mike Newton and thought he could be developed into an actual 3d character. But what's going on with Jacob? Onward!
mjdolan chapter 8 . 6/19/2016
holy spamoney! I loved your dialogue in the first part of the chapter. What a great way of moving the characters through the scene! I could really see the motion but without the thick fat of constant positioning sentences.

What was up with that last part? Damn I could feel the heat!
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