This was fantastic

Hey. This is really good! However, I have issue with your use of the T-slur in this chapter. As a trans person, throwing that word around when it was so unnecessary, it really threw me off. Some “jokes” aren’t worth it. Otherwise, it’s been very well written so far, and I enjoy the premise entirely.

This was a great story!

I had never ever read a fanfic before that Jake impriting on someone other than Bella. I thought it would hurt too much to read from her perspective and man, it hurt. A lot. I thought about stop reading until I saw your A / N at the end of the chapter and gave it another chance, with a crushed heart I confess. but it was very worth it ! beautiful story, excellent writing, congratulations! Love it

so cute

Josh amazing

cute!

I think things are moving a bit fast with Bella and Jacob considering it's not like he broke his imprint for her

Just discovered this story and binged it over two days! I loved every minute of it! Your unique take on their story was so great. Thank you for this story

O .gosh! This was such a great story! It was so interesting and I wasn't expecting several things that happened!

This is literally one of my favorite stories ever.

I read this in a day. I am so impressed with this. By far, this is my favorite Bella Jacob story. And I've read 100's. I sincerely hope that you continue to create amazing stories, even if they aren't fanfiction. You have the gift. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

Xoxo
Cujoo

wow I almost died a couple of times. The angst almost killed me. You are good !

God, you are too good with the angst, I can't read it, I want, but it's too much. It hurts.

Wow! That was so HOT! Excellent! I wasn't familiar with the movie Death Proof or "Down in Mexico" but now I love it! Don't know how I could have missed this movie! Loved it!