Reviews for The Three Strike Point Flag System
sunnyflight530 chapter 7 . 6/12
sunnyflight530 chapter 6 . 6/12
i wonder how many woodland creatures can eat chocolate? birds can eat french fries, and on a girl-scout camping trip in the woods, some raccoons stole marshmallows and a few Reese's peanut butter cups while we were at the bathroom...
Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2016
I think is is the most beautiful chapter yet. He Once-ler opening up about his past and how you chose to explore that was just...brilliantly amazing. I loved very single chapter of this story because they are lined with the wisdom, spotless accurate characterization and development on not only their character but also their growing bond. The connection between The Lorax and The Once-ler is so beautifully portrayed here, it's just such brilliant writing. This is what the movie should've focused on instead of making it into an average children's action movie. I thought this chapter was really stunning. I resonated with the backstory you gave The Once-ler because it perfectly explained his motives now, his personality quirks and it really was a realistic and emotional backstory. I had a similar family life where my dad was trying to make something of himself, trying to capture his long dreams with optimism and my mom didn't really have the patience to live with it. I think this may be the most amazing fanfic I ever read because you made me relate to The Once-ler on a deep personal level. I can't articulate it enough to how much this fic is already impacting me but I just wanted to say you're one of the greatest authors ever to truly make my life happier. A million kudos go out to you.
DrCaitlinSnow chapter 14 . 2/10/2015
This is amazing, you know. It makes me feel all the pain I went through in the Lorax, but amplified through your beautiful words. Please. I am begging you to continue. Just a chapter or two more to complete this absolutely lovely and gorgeous tale you have re-spun.
Vikka13 chapter 14 . 5/10/2013
I can't find the words to describe just how perfect this fic is. And the last two chapters, it was impossible not to cry reading this. Truly amazing, I do hope you'll continue it!
Maria chapter 14 . 3/4/2013
I mean, seriously, wow. I am literally tearing up here, it was that good.
I loved reading this story so much! It was beautifully written, emotional, and you captured the Once-ler's character perfectly. I wish I could post a better review about this, but I don't think I can really describe how much I loved this. Amazing job, you're an amazing writer. :)
TheKid'sKid chapter 14 . 1/14/2013
This deserves SO many more reviews. And I wish I had something more eloquent to say. I bow to you and this story, thank you for writing it. :)
Miyavilurver chapter 14 . 8/18/2012
this is amazing. wow. i love this
AwesomeOliver chapter 14 . 8/17/2012 Just wow. I've never read a fanfic that made my heart hurt as much as this. And that last sentence is supposed to be a complement. You don't just make the Onceler a guy who fell off the right path. You made him fall and hit rocks on the way down, rocks he didn't notice were breaking him until he landed at the bottom, and that's what I LOVE about this! I felt his sickness, his pain, his guilt, an that's what makes an author great at what he/she does. Don't stop writing please! I'll be waiting anxiously for an update :)
TheLolaMonster chapter 14 . 6/16/2012
I love this story, although for some reason I never submitted a review for it! Just everything about this is wonderful, from the bro-mance with Lorax and Once-ler to the very subtle hinting at Once-ler and Norma's relationship. It's so well written and believable.

Also, I love how you associate Mumford & Sons with Once-ler with this chapter, I always thought that their songs could describe him perfectly. Especially "Thistles and Weeds", "The Cave" and "Dust Bowl Dance". I also love how long this chapter is, I love long chapters of stories, haha. The angst is also a nice touch.

Can't wait until the next chapter, keep up the good work!
Mikaceous chapter 14 . 6/15/2012
This chapter.

It shows basically everything that I ever pictured the Once-ler feeling after the Lorax left him, even going so far as to blame the Lorax. That just seems to in-character, I can't even- Oncie is definitely not the type to just admit doing the bad thing, I totally see him trying to force the blame on everything but himself. I also really liked how he kept repeating, over and over, "He deserved this." It sets this sort of rhythm for the story, a beat of sorts.

I loved this chapter, sad feelings and all :,D
Took-Baggins chapter 14 . 6/14/2012
I love this line: The king sat alone in his kingdom of dust and he did not weep because there was simply nothing left to mourn for.


This chapter was wonderfully depressing, especially the last few chapters/
ScatterSunshine50 chapter 14 . 6/13/2012
This was soooo beautiful! Oh my gosh, the Once-ler's outburst was so intense! So many people skip over the aftermath part because they think it's unimportant or boring, but you did it so well! I also liked that you showed the Once-ler actively making a legitimate effort to do something about his situation. Soooooo incredible! Great job! :D
wow chapter 14 . 6/13/2012
i'm literally crying
The Animanga Girl chapter 14 . 6/12/2012
And this is the chapter in which the reader feels rather depressed D:

Still, good work :)
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