Reviews for Bite
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Keep writing on this one yeah it's smut but you should make it with them finding out she's pregnet and then trunks being born then them raising him and doing it trying to keep quiet not to notify trunks
LadyBardock chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Nice :)
LW12 chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
I love it, its so sweet. I want the sequel.
ShiftersFate chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
I really enjoyed this it does give a different view on him :)
Curlyquills chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
*blinks and fans herself* Wow.. that was pretty hot.. Keep up the good work.
Okinawa Girl chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
This is pretty god for your second Lemon write some more.
ShinDongHeeVegeta chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Good job :D :D
Kitty G chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
The "O.S." part was icky, but almost close to the original story. An X-rated adaptation of how Vegeta took Bulma as " his wife". A bit bold and dirty, though.
Heartbreakers chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Liked this very much
Kaiya chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
it was geat and kinda dirty
A Username itadakimasu101 chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
WOW! I can't believe this is only ur 2nd one-shot. Very professional! A (btw sp, alleviated not

I would LOVE to read a sequel. 3
Jellybeans chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Amazing. I love lemon bulma and vegeta story's.
Yvonne chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Good lemon. I thought it was funny when bulma was pleasuring herself on her bed n vegeta was watching her and creeping into her room like a stalker.
BloodyRose2016 chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
nice job, i did not think veggie was out of character at all. keep writing.
AylaWilson16 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
wow...well time to go wake up the husband ;) very well written and steamy! who doesnt love a good lemon btwn these 2?
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