Reviews for Falling Apart
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
IM SOBBING OH MY GOD (my mind is a mess now but the rational part says: this was written very well.)
FezQueen chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Wha- shit. What the hell just happened-?

That's really creepy!

I love it! XD
mamacrime25 chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
That was intense and sad, but it was still a good story!
LAurore chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Oh yeah, that is really sad...
piratemonkey06 chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Why, hello there!

This wasn't as bad an attempt at angst as you say it is - it's heartbreaking (tick), tragedic (tick - wait, is that a word?), and you get (quite a few) bonus points for leaving Lisbon in exactly the same situation that Jane was in after his family's death (down to the wedding ring!).

Good work!

Anyway, toodle-pip!

piratemonkey06
idonthaveaname chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Oh why? Jane dead. Or is he? And Libson is a padded cell.. I am not happy. :(
SheWroteTheWords chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
:'( :'( THIS IS HEARTBREAKING TAYLIE. I MEAN, GOD, HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO THE MENTALIST FANDOM? WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?

Sorry. xD It had to be uploaded, you realise that, right? It's heartbreaking, but it's brilliantly written. I love it.