Reviews for The Forbidden Fruit
Jeff'sLittleKiller chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
...Yaoi for the win?
princess Ayaka uchiha kurochi chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
G-Geez why would I do such a think * lies and blushes*
the.heart.crest chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I am simply speechless!

This was so good! An erotic and really intense Lemon!

wow... I'm stunned!

how can some words be so hot?

maaan... I have no words, that could describe this! - I'll continue in german, you can translate it ok?

Also, dieser Lemon hat alles was er braucht. Gefühl, Spannung, Sex (natürlich) und ein bisschen Gefahr.

Sebastians allwissenheit hat mich zum schmunzeln gebracht, es ist doch so klar, dass er alles weiß oder?

er ist ein verdammter Dämon!


please continue to write such GOOD Lemons!
ChibiCHICKENluver chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
omfg this was the best
Vee-Melee chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
problem. at the bggining he says he's 13, laterhe says he's 15. other than that well done!
Whimsicott chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
I loved this! *u*

just one thing threw me off though...the age; in the first sentence he's 13, but later on, he's 15

...that just threw me for a sec D
promocat chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
i know how ciel feels-day after day of sebastian sexyness!
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Awwwwwww... The smutty smutt... Mhmmm I love it! :3... That le sexy time scene was pretty hawt there! Hehehe.. And it had a pinch of romance.. I mean the "I Love You" not the "Let's Furk"... Cuz that's already there... Obliviously! Haha!
Seek-Wolf chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
It.s me Alois BunnyEars Trancy with my promised review and holy fudge that was awsome hope you make another chapter soon