|Reviews for Sweet Dreams|
| Hannah L-Sama chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
Aw, how cute! I liked it! :)
Just a few things: first, the description doesn't really describe the story much, I suggest you change that. The fact that it's Tuesday morning is irrelevant and not mentioned in the one-shot, and the one-shot doesn't include Amu NOT liking rocking Yoru, which is implied in the summary.
Also, I would suggest making Ikuto older. Even if you're not going by the show ages, which people will most likely assume you are, if Ikuto is 20 and Amu is, lets say, 2 years younger than him, and they've been married for a year, then that makes her 18, which means she got married at 17, which is still pretty young to be raising a child. But that's just a suggestion, you obviously don't have to do it if you don't want to. And if you don't want to change Ikuto's age, you can just specify Amu's age.
Anyway, this was a cute one-shot! I liked it a lot! :)
| KareBear123 chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
ahhhhhhhhhhhh. :P i love it or do i hate it i don't know
| claraowl chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. So Sweet. XD
| 1fan P chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
that was stinking cute! one of the best one shots for these two I've ever read. and i'm being honest. great job miki-tan! luvs
p/s: i'll log in later and favorite this.