|Reviews for how it should of ended|
| iamsuchaflippingpancake13 chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
| Black Angel Of Berlin chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
| 777angeloflove chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
| Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Aww, this is so cute. I like your ending better. I was hoping there would be more Gerita moments in the movie and you provided that with this adorable alternate ending.
You might want to work on your paragraphs and spacing. Also, each time a new character speaks there should be a seperate paragraph.
Anyway, this story is adorably sweet. Good work.