|Reviews for Flu Shot|
| DetectiveObsessed chapter 1 . 1/3
this story is pretty good! I'd just work on your use of punctuation a little bit!
| littleOneWriter chapter 3 . 8/20/2013
How does the story go on? I'm curious and can't wait!
| pianogirl chapter 3 . 6/30/2013
| littleOneWriterGirl chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
I've read you're story so far and I'm curious how it goes on.
What about an update?
xoxo Eve (:
| Pianogirl chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
Please update soon I'm going insane with suspense. Keep up the great work and hope to hear from you soon!
| Pianogirl chapter 3 . 6/19/2012
Glad to here from you Anniefivestar, but sad to hear you've been in the hospital. I hope you are doing better and hope your last week of school goes well. Hope to read an update soon, keep up the great work!
| Annie Five star chapter 3 . 6/19/2012
Hey Its really me not some poser but the updae thing didnt work too well. I meant to say:Hey guys, really really sorry I havent been able to update in so long.I've been in and out of the hospital for the last couple of months. Its of my last week of school so I should be able to update soon. Much Love.
| Pianogirl chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
I hope to see an update soon your stories are too good not to get a conclusion. Keep up the great work!
| Pianogirl chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
Please update your awesome story soon, I hope school is less busy- I feel your pain on that just graduated from college last week and yeah school can be grueling. But your fics have been a nice escape from the crazy school stuff. Good Luck with it!
| ChaseROCKS chapter 2 . 4/23/2012
Ahh! No way! *Smiles* I couldn't believe it when I saw that you posted a second chapter for this story! I have to say, I absolutely LOVE the Ben/Annie pairing! They're adorable! A huge (and I mean HUGE) grin spread across my face as I read this chapter! It's great to see Ben's point of view, and I totally love how you write him! I especially loved the end of this chapter, I was like 'Aww!' when I read the part where Annie said she didn't want to lose him and Ben's thinking 'What did she just say? I'm pretty sure saying things like that is against our unspoken rules. But then again isn't this? All of this? "You're not going to lose me. You need to rest." As shes starts to doze she mumbles something into my chest that makes my heart skip a beat. Did she just say she loves me?'. Oh, I just love that last line! Please update soon! I am SO into this story and (yes, I said this before, but I'm going to say it again because it's super awesome) I love, love, LOVE the Ben/Annie ship! You, AnnieFiveStar, write the characters so perfectly! Awesome chapter in this amazing story with a great author! I can't wait for more! Please write more (and soon)! You brought a giant smile to my face with this update, and I have to admit that I've read it, like, 4 times now... :D What? I was really happy and excited... not to mention it's super good writing. :D Oh, and thanks for the clarification to my weird brain that couldn't grasp what was going on in the first chapter. Sorry about that. :P Anyway, keep up the amazingly super awesome work! You made this Chase-obsessed-fan really happy! Can't wait for the next chapter! AnnieFiveStar, you are awesome! Go Chase! ChaseROCKS ;)
Oh, and thanks, Pianogirl, for that other review post to try and help clear up what I missed! Thank you!
| Pianogirl chapter 2 . 4/22/2012
Woohoo, Happy dance an update... hey this chapter had everything fist fights, romantic tender moments, loved it. This chapter cleared up a lot of things that were kinda insinuated in the first chapter, well sorta ;) Realistically Annie doesn't want to admit what Ben means to her but when she truly needs someone her subconscious directs her to Ben.
"Look I know you have a crush on Annie and all but shes a big girl she can decide." - Totally True of happening. Suggestion for Jimmy/Ben conversation fight: Ben confront Jimmy about his feelings for Annie but not acting on them but wanting to keep her from being happy with another man to always keep her as his backup for when things go south with his girlfriend. Feel free to use or mock :)
Please update soon (both your stories) Chase fanfiction is on one of my web page saves in my Iphone, now I check at free moments throughout the day, I may be an addict :)
| Pianogirl chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Please update this story its so good, it would be ashame not to finish.
ChaseRocks- I was curious about Annie/Ben already being in a relationship because:
A: When she decided to go home she was fixing to call Ben, and he answered with hopes of her asking him to dinner
B. When she told the team she was leaving early, Jimmy said okay sarcastically
C. When she grabbed him the tea and said it's up here, Ben responded I knew that.
D. When Ben was going to grab the file for her, she said don't get into it with Marco and Jimmy.- though that may be that they just don't like him, but if Annie/Ben weren't in a relationship would anyone at Annie's office let Ben take the file that could have sensitive information in it pertaining to a case?
- All those together made me kind of think they are an item in this story.
| ChaseROCKS chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Yes, yes, YES! LOVE this pairing! We totally need more Ben & Annie stories out there! Keep up the awesome work! Please update soon! Oh, and I read Pianogirl's review and she said something about Ben & Annie 'in a relationship already'... did I miss something in your story? Did you mention that and I just missed it? Maybe I read it too fast... Oh, and when does this story take place (does it happen before the 17th episode)? Am I asking too many questions? Sorry about that, I tend to talk to much. Anyway, please continue... soon. :D Love Ben & Annie! ChaseROCKS ;)
| Pianogirl chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Yay, a new fix; loved the whole thing- so in this story are Annie/Ben in a relationship already, and does Marco&Jimmy know? Keep up the great work