|Reviews for The House of Mirrored Walls|
| EricaX chapter 10 . 4/7/2012
Ahh, two years later. I figured there was going to be a time gap for this chapter. Though in stories like this, that's really the best way to wrap things up.
You wrapped this chapter up really well. It was nice that Natalie and Marv are happily together now and Harry and Vera ended up staying together.
It was cute the way you wrote how Kevin admits his feelings to Marv. I loved the whole idea about Harry and Vera being in the van too! Clever!
This was, overall, a great story and I enjoyed reading it. It was well written and kept my attention the whole way through! Great work! :)
| EricaX chapter 9 . 4/7/2012
The last chapter left off with a slight cliffhanger, which was quite nice :) Now we get to see if Marv really does go through with killing Natalie ort not.
I think you did a great job writing the conflict Marv was going through before Kevin showed up. Showing his perspective and showing how he was thinking it wasn't really murder (to him). And you feel for the guy just a tiny bit because all he wants is to be with the woman he loves.
Now this chapter hgad an interesting twist that I was not expecting. Vera was the one who is dead and not Marv (well, I figured all along Marv wasn't dead.)
Also, the part about Harry nearly shooting Marv before he died? Wow. Poor Harry and Marv. :(
I'm glad that Marv remembered everything once he awoke in the hospital. It was quite interesting how things turned out. ;)
| EricaX chapter 8 . 4/7/2012
This was a great chapter! It really did start explaining thingsa like you said they would. :)
POor Marv. The funeral part was very sad and it really made me feel bad for the poor guy. It was also interesting to see Kevin's point of view and how he realized that Harry was not just the burglar he remembered, but somebody's friend, uncle, brother...
All the Marv and Bandit moments were adorable, though there was a part of me that cringed at the dog's actions. I have two dogs in the house and I remember the nightmare before they were housetrained. So, I feel for Kevin.
I was interested to hear Vera's partial story of what happened. It was good that you did that the way you did, because it made me want to keep reading to hear what more happened that she didn't want to explain to Kevin.
| EricaX chapter 7 . 4/2/2012
Ooooh, another exciting chapter! :)
It was neat getting to see Harry meet the other Marv and see that HIS Marv and this Marv are nothing alike. I'm still interested to see what is going to happen in the Vera, Marv, Natalie triangle.
Also, am I sensing a bit of Kevin/Marv? :)
| EricaX chapter 6 . 3/31/2012
Okay, so I finally got around to reading this. :)
So far, I am very interested in this story. It's got a creepy sci-fi feel to it. :) It's a shame about Harry dying, but its nice that Marv has Kevin to help him through this tough time. I love the idea of Marv naming his dog, Bandit! :)
The dead Marv is interesting, though I'm not entirely sure what his motives are in this fic. He really seems to like Natalie, but he still loves Vera as well. It would be a shame for him to 'leave' Vera. It's bad enough losing a loved one, not to mention being able to see them in the afterlife, possibly interested in someone else. Poor Vera. :(
Just a great story in general that is really keeping me interested. I'm excited to see what happens next!