|Reviews for Kings and Lords|
| x.-kTa-.x chapter 31 . 4/27
THAT WAS SOOO GOOD. I can just imagine the Doctor being like this,and Rose too! You were really loyal to the characters and that's not something I find everyday (the OCC this days is kinda alarming!), so I thank you for it, for this story and, oh, I'm in love with this, seriously.
The only thing that I have to ask is: there are a lot of references to the episodes "The impossible planet/The Satan pit" (I love them), like the last phrase (rthe stuff of legends), and when you mention the lost of the TARDIS there. So, I was kinda intrigued to why didn't you add or comment Satan's words for Rose, that she's going to die in battle very soon. I know it doesn't have anything to do with the plot, but it still makes me wonder.
Apart from that curious question, I find everything in this story lovely. I'm gonna give you applauses!
(sorry if the english is a bit wrong; not my native languaje xd)
| Kay chapter 31 . 4/14
I don't have words to tell you how wonderfully you've portrayed the doctor. Everything about this story is magnificent. It's absolutely perfect and absolutely them. I love your writing. You're incredibly skilled. I plan on reading most, if not all of your stories about the two of them.
| sonamy4life chapter 17 . 3/31
I just died...
| sonamy4life chapter 16 . 3/31
zhyzfhdhdujsjdsdhdhwwjjjh GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR HOW DARE HE!
| Liz Ben chapter 31 . 3/18
I have ever never read a chapter as intense as the previous one. absolutely stunning writing. thanks for sharing your talent with us!
| kisses-A chapter 17 . 2/28
Aaaaaaand I'm crying.
| kisses-A chapter 16 . 2/28
But...but...but...NOOOOOOOOO! You can't just do that to someone!
| kisses-A chapter 15 . 2/28
That was just a tad heartbreaking. :(
| Gohaun chapter 31 . 2/3
I loved this story! So glad I happened to stumble upon it. You are an amazing writer, I was captivated the whole time! Well done!
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/4/2014
But I'm still not forgiving Zerin
I was hoping he'd be killed off
Ngah well you can't have everything
But I'm satisfied now
I'm going to fade away and stop bothering you with my comments and swear words
| Guest chapter 19 . 12/4/2014
I LOVE YOU NOW
WHERE THE HECK IS ZERIN THOUGH
IS HE DEAD?
DID HE ACCIDENTALLY DRINK THE POISON HIMSELF?
IS HE LYING ON THE GROUND NEXT TO ST BARTS WITH A POOL OF BLOOD AROUND HIS HEAD AND HIS BEST FRIEND SHOUTING "SHERLOCK"?
I MUST KNOW THESE THINGS
I HOPE HE DIED IN THE MOST PAINFUL WAY POSSIBLE :-D
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/4/2014
(still the angry swearing girl from the past chapters)
I'm rereading this to check if I missed anything
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/4/2014
This is the same girl with the asterisks a couple chapters before but I'm not going to censor anything now
Zerin is a fucking asshole with an incapability to grow a pair of balls but yet is capable of drowning in his own fucking saliva and tears becAUSE HE'S FEELING SORRY FOR HIMSELF LIKE WHAT THE HECK DUDE GO FUCK YOURSELF OR YOUR LOVELY LOVELY SHADDARA BUT YOU HAVE NO GUTS TO CONFESS TO HER SO YOU CONDEMN THE BAD WOLF AND ONCOMING STORM BECAQUSEYOU WANTPH JTOJI FUCK THE WOLF LIKE PJAIV ;VJ; WAJ O;AVW I'M SO PISSED RIGHT NOW I'M KEYBOARD SMASHING
WHAT THE FUCKPUAIWBVYTPWHYAU EPVIAUH PIUH PIUH PIAUHV EPHU FAPIFHE PAIH
I'm sorry for putting you through this author of this story. I love this but it's so infuriating I wanna cry or keyboard smash this again. Um. Just. Delete this review.
I just had to vent.
Awkward. I'm sorry, I'm not usually like this.
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/4/2014
I liked this Zerin dude in the first couple chapters
And then I reach this part and I'm like
NO YOU FKIN DK GO TO HL I HOPE YOU DROWN IN **************************** ******* *********************** ********** ***** **********-***************
| MRTL85 chapter 31 . 9/8/2014
This fic was fantastic! Thouroughly enjoyed reading this and cannot wait to read the next one in the series!