Reviews for Mending Broken Hearts
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Oh I love this, it is so good. The decision that Bella should have made, to marry her true love, stay human and have a human family. Rosalie is a great character, this is a great way to represent her. Billy and Charlie are there too for support. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
OMG that was the most perfect thing i have ever! read
you are amazing and i love you now just so you know *hugs*
liragreen chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
How lovely is this? What a stunning chapter. I love the way you made Edward grow a conscience, showed how Rosalie's bitterness comes to a good end, and how Bella comes to her senses.

If only this had been the way the original text went-how much more believable and beautiful it would have been.
sweetdreams1 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
One of the very few times I actually like the corpse known as Edward in a story.

This is so easy to understand. So why did SM fail to 'get' it?

Beautiful O/S, asty

hugs

Victoria
LilyAurora chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Yes! See why couldn't that have happened in 'Breaking My Damn heart'... LOL

Awesaome hun... Now I'm gonna be late for work... because I've become addicted to your fics...

The others will have to wait till later...

But yes that was really good... I always believed Edwardo dazzled her... and if she had been in her right frame of mind she would have run away screaming...

xxx
NikkiB1973 chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Wow honey. I just loved this.I have not spent enough time reading lately so I have taken some time today to just focus on that! I am so glad I did. This one-shot is beautiful. I could picture every scene in my head as you wrote it.

You captured Edward's character perfectly (not easy to do, I always struggle). His inner conflict was well described. I also loved your depiction of Rosealie, very well written.

The ending itself was just perfect and the image of Jake and Bella being reunited will stay in my mind!

AWESOME writing honey, thanks so much for sharing!

Nikki :)
Emm-N7 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Oh wow, that was amazingly written and I loved it so very much.
Lucyferina chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Loved it, very different from your usual but I liked it a lot. Talk to you soon my dear...
Miami12 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Wow! This a beautifully told story in one chapter. I loved the scene at the end when they come together in the woods. You managed to convey at lot with a few sentences. Lovely.
brankel1 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Love that they knew she should be with Jacob.
BeckieT108 chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Loved it! This how the wedding scene should have ended. Thank you for making it right.
MsSkylerBlack chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Very nice! Do you have plans to make this a full story? I hope so...
notashamedtobe chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Absolutely beautiful. Happy it finally got posted. I kept getting these error messages.
taoist elf chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Awww! Beautifully written! I must say the way you explained the whole Edward "pressuring and dazzling" her into compliance is right on the money with how I saw the whole situation. You even so insightfully brought up the voluturi. Bella irritated me toward the end of the books (well more than that) because SM never truly developed (IMHO) how she'd really feel in this situation. She kicked real emotions to the curb and totally glossed over the situation she'd created making a very distasteful outcome that felt like it had been written by someone who suffered from schitzophrenia. A lot of the concepts she brought up she just left by the way-side, like the canon concept that vampires remain in that moment that they are changed - therefore Bella would always be torn between two men.

I also found the discrepancy in wealth power and status uncomfortable and I liked the way you highlighted Edward using that and his looks to get what he wanted.

Loved the last scene with Jake and Bella in the woods. That was a very satisfying ending.

Bravo chica!