Reviews for Hold Me Down |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m sure there are many that have a completed pull to each other that one isn’t ready for. But damn is it painful to watch I really feel for Jasper and Jacob. Such goos friends in Switzerland Lol Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adulting Good job Bella |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t know which way you will jump with this Edward’s words coukd be taken both ways But for him I hope it means he can let go |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg Therapy Bella Lots of therapy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Move to another city Edward Lol Really not funny Heartbreaking |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Edward How awful to be at the mercy of your heart with someone who is cruel with it |
![]() ![]() ![]() She’s awful She needs to get a handle on her shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... This was tough... but I loved it, so much! Beautiful, painfully beautiful... You're an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was… angsty. Bella was so so so broken. I hate how she treated Edward. I hate that she loves him and yet she pushed him away- hard. I hate that Edward slept around - a lot because of it. (Like, a threesome?! Come on!) My heart hurts for Kate and tang- but hopefully they can find someone who loves them completely- and that wasn’t Edward. I want to believe that Bella and Edward have a happy future ahead of them… but after 20 years of disfunction- I dunno. Would love a future take if you ever revisit this story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This version of Bella should be easy to hate, but like Edward I crave more of her too. Such a tender, heart stopping story. Beautiful ending as well! Thanks for the lovely read 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it!️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first time I read this, I really thought this was it. I won’t be able to review again on the last chapter but just to say, this fic is fabulous! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gutted! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I keep on trying to post only to learn that I have done so before. Just to say that I love this fic. Enough said. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is so painful for Bella. So well written, though. As with most BPOV fics, this one would benefit from EPOV now and again. |