I have the biggest knot in my throat,it actually started from beginning. This story was sad,brutal,unfair,
It was so exhausting to feel sad . You are wonderful. I hope you are still writing ,because you’re so talented.️️️️️️️

I think they end up together? I hope so.

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I wish there was an epilogue. I would love to know how they finally made it all work!

I’m sure there are many that have a completed pull to each other that one isn’t ready for.
But damn is it painful to watch
I really feel for Jasper and Jacob.
Such goos friends in Switzerland
Lol
Thank you

Adulting
Good job Bella

I don’t know which way you will jump with this
Edward’s words coukd be taken both ways
But for him I hope it means he can let go

Omg
Therapy Bella
Lots of therapy

Move to another city Edward
Lol
Really not funny
Heartbreaking

Poor Edward
How awful to be at the mercy of your heart with someone who is cruel with it

She’s awful
She needs to get a handle on her shit

Wow... This was tough... but I loved it, so much! Beautiful, painfully beautiful... You're an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing.

This was… angsty. Bella was so so so broken. I hate how she treated Edward. I hate that she loves him and yet she pushed him away- hard. I hate that Edward slept around - a lot because of it. (Like, a threesome?! Come on!)
My heart hurts for Kate and tang- but hopefully they can find someone who loves them completely- and that wasn’t Edward.
I want to believe that Bella and Edward have a happy future ahead of them… but after 20 years of disfunction- I dunno. Would love a future take if you ever revisit this story :)

This version of Bella should be easy to hate, but like Edward I crave more of her too. Such a tender, heart stopping story. Beautiful ending as well! Thanks for the lovely read 3

Love it!️