I’m glad I found this. The angst is completely up my alley and I’ve loved the ups and downs and all-arounds. It’s been heart-wrenching at times, but I’m kind of masochistic cause they’re my fav kinds of fics! Thanks for sharing!
-Gigi xo

Different but lovely, it made cry like a lunatic!

You’ve probably long stopped checking fanfic but I at least wanted to ask. Is the ending intentionally left open for interpretation? Their last words could really go either way. “I won’t ever go back there with you Bella” references the past w her he doesn’t want to repeat but willing to go forward with the better Bella? Or was that the nail in the coffin? Like “yeah it always feels right being with you but we can never go back there”
Then at the table it’s pointed out he specifically has eyes for her! And if Bella believed they were truly done she wouldn’t let her heart go their when he’s looking at her right?! ARGH LOL please give me some closure. These stories are for me to escape the uncertainty of real life that I feel so incomplete without an epilogue or finale.

I can’t get through this story because I hate Bella so much. She’s manipulative, wispy-washy, and the fact that she continues to hurt Edward after she gets what she wants from him just makes her a horrible person.

You did a really good job writing this if that’s what you intended to happen, and all in all you have a great way of telling a story. I know you’re a great writer, but I just don’t like her character. That’s all.

I really enjoyed this even tho it was short it shows so many sides or ppl and life and change , great work .

This is rough, man... Though one of the best angst stores I've ever read.

Even after all these years I go back and read this story hoping for an additional chapter. Love your work. Here’s to hoping you have more stories to share with us.

Loved it. So glad I found the completed story as waiting for the next chapter would have killed me

Goodness this was rough as hell to read, so much pain and destruction. It left me aching to slap Bella silly so she would wake the hell up and get on with it already lol. Thank you for sharing.

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Great job.

Made me cry more than once... jeez

Fuck me this story was tough..

I don't like her at all. She's a manipulative bitch.

So Bella and Edward don't end up together? That's sucks.

This is one of my favorite fanfics-it feels real and everytime I read it I still cry. Thank you for writing this incredible story and I hope you write more.