Reviews for Hold Me Down
jimemon chapter 3 . 3/31/2012
Really enjoying your story :)
teambellaedward chapter 3 . 3/31/2012
:)
SilverFai chapter 3 . 3/30/2012
Seriously hope Bella doesn't lose her chance to get Edward, before he goes away because she's not good for him :(
0 BASIA 0 chapter 3 . 3/30/2012
Let the games begin! Can't wait to find out the deal between those two. Thanks for sharing 8-)
Songbird5 chapter 2 . 3/30/2012
I was actually looking for this the other week to see if you'd updated and discovered that you'd taken it down. I'm so happy you decided to re-post; I loved this story the first time round. I have to say though, from what I remember of the first version we were just getting to a really good part and I'm not sure I can handle all that angst again! Anyway can't wait to find out what happens and hopefully we'll be back to the chapter I was at soon enough xxx
LucyMac chapter 2 . 3/27/2012
I am enjoying your story, but I have a new definition of cliff hanger. Cliff hanger: starting a story with gripping angst, snark-ella, and ditzy "simple" rebound girl (if that's what she is), and then moving to the past. I want rebound girl to have a drink poured on her head. (I think this morning I am snark-ella). Of course, I get the feeling Edward wants to rub something in Bella's face with rebound girl. Edward wants Bella, but he wants to see her hurt as well. Rebound girl is being used, poor, simple rebound girl.
teambellaedward chapter 2 . 3/26/2012
:)
AmeryMarie chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
This is much better this time around. I can't wait for more. If you're still looking for prereaders, I'm game. Just drop me a line and we can exchange emails, and discuss the who, what, where, why, when, and how's of it, as well as your preferences and mine. Once again, good job with this. This version is much more polished and the vibe is consistent and lacking the melodrama I would expect from most stories of this type.
Isabela is Online chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
I think your story is interesting and intriguing. I want to read more. Thank you.
minordetails chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Love it :)
teambellaedward chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
:)
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