Reviews for My Children
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
I love it, enchanting and I would love to see more
kakita101 chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
This is an interesting start to what sounds like a wonderful story. I look forward to reading more.
klester1987c chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
PLEASE continue!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Looks like its going to be really good if you carry it on, so
Red-White Roses chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
This story has alot of potential in the future and you should continue. Personally, I think it should be a crossover.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Continue quickly pleeease! This idea is brilliant!
Beagle Bug chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Continue or I will cry little tears of sorrow and gorge myself with ice-cream :)
SilverLunaMoon chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
NO! You CAN'T leave itlike that! I wannaknow what's going to happen X) Pleeease? I really liked this *fave*
QueenBlueLake chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Oh, please continue! This is great
nanaqt chapter 1 . 3/30/2012

Pangean Reader of Interest chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
It sounds like an interesting story w/ a potentially complex storyline and plot if you persue it correctly. I can't wait to read chapter 2 (even though I have a nasty habit of loosing stories in ...) Personally, I agree thay it should be a crossover w/ narnia. As a rather inquisitive reader, I would like to thank you for taking time out of your schedule to explore your own creativity and imagination like so few of us do now-a-days.