Reviews for 幽霊
guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Continue please until at least until naoto opens the watch and find the hole from takayas bullet
Cykick chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Well...shit
You've gotten me into the depressed zone again
seiryux chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
At first, I was like "Oh, so that why Naoto was at the top floor of Escapade". Then comes the twist and I'm blown away.

Great story. I would like to see more of this.
Lacie Noirflecet chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
At first, my reaction was... Yay Shinji gets to meet a relative of Hamuko

Then suddenly at the ending i was like... Oh gosh. Naoto talked to a dead Shinji.

I'm wondering why Mitsuru told Naoto to meet Shinjiro-kun...
I.K.A. Valian chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
This story was kind of standard fair. Right up until the end. That twist came out of nowhere and made this one-shot (or whatever it turns into). The real question then becomes, if you take this further, why did Mitsuru suggest meeting with Shinji if he really was dead... and what's with the pocket watch. My own opinion is you should see where this goes. Regardless of what you choose, this was good.

I.K.A. Valian
Part0fthDis-play chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
I think this story is AWESOME! Please make this into a longer story. I think it would be fantastic. You have the writing skills to make it very good.
Lemo chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
hnnrrg yay 3 for some reason I love youngersister!Naoto, though I usually imagine her sibling to be Minato due to obvious similarities. For some reason Hamuko makes me think of Rise more... Though I've never seen a fic with such lol