|Reviews for Destroying the Goddess|
| AraelDranoth chapter 16 . 10/2/2013
HAHAHAHAHAHA! 'Arrow to the knee!' Classic! Get that one from Skyrim did you?
| AraelDranoth chapter 3 . 10/2/2013
there were a few cases of spelling mistakes or incorrect words used but otherwise it was good.
| AraelDranoth chapter 2 . 10/2/2013
AWESOME STORY IDEA! I absolutely hated the way part two ended and I think this is the perfect way to get back at the main plot.
| CascadeofRaindrops chapter 25 . 6/28/2013
It took me awhile, but this story was simply...amazing. I loved how you put this story together. Minor mistakes her and there, ya know? But this gave me a good feeling, I love it!
Wait, would Fang and Snow like each other in the end? I mean,ya know, cause thdy got them moments in here, ya know...
| Pink Crystalline Roses chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
You got the story right! This is the best Caius x Light story I've ever readed! *Heart* my friend Sarah thought the pairing was absurd but she should really read this! She'll be taken aback.*Grin*
| son-of-heaven176 chapter 25 . 4/27/2013
This was a very good story, even though it was pretty short. You managed to pace it very well.
I was concerned for a bit that you were rushing into a Snow/Fang paring; after the time you took to develop Light/Caius. it would have been a shame to see a rushed Snow/Fang. Good thing that it did not end up that way.
PS: You might want to consider taking a look at Shire Folk's "The Annals of Darkness" if you want some examples of good battle-scene writing.
| son-of-heaven176 chapter 3 . 4/23/2013
So far, so good. Just three Two things that I want to comment on:
First, you were not very clear on what Hope meant to say. Were you trying to say that Hope was acclimated with 500AF weaponry or 400 AF weaponry?
Second, in Sazh's line, it's supposed to be "left behind," not "left being."
| son-of-heaven176 chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Pretty good setup. Well-written so far, and a good explanation of the variation from canon. Expect me to be going on in this story; you got me interested.
| SleepyCrimson Ninja chapter 25 . 4/6/2013
Yo that was awesome...
you made me ship Light/Caius pair, thou at some point i hoped that underneath that EPIC hate they loved each other and you brought it on this story,
its a well written and heartwarming plot, i love it!
kudos to you!
a fellow author,
| SleepyCrimson Ninja chapter 18 . 4/5/2013
yo... that was some serious tale...my tears fell, and that only happens if i am truly moved, well done...
also, you kinda got me hooked to this fic...usually i don't read fics that was above 20 but you made me change my mind...well written, kudos to you!
and with that you have a fellow writing that favorites your fic! :)
| SleepyCrimson Ninja chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
and like nay sayings go...i think..."the more hate you have for that one person, there's always some kind of love underneath it all"
Nice! i'm a new fan of yours now XD
| ScarlettSerpent chapter 25 . 1/19/2013
Brilliant! Best Caius/Lightning story I've read so far :) I think one of my favorite bit was this:
"Who defeated five dragons in one day?"
With bitterness, Corin responded. "You did…"
"Mhm, that's what I thought. Have you saved the world yet Corin?"
"I was working on it…"
XD I love the interactions between Caius and Lightning, and they're both very in-character, which can be tricky to do.
Wonderful story. I read it all in one day :)
| Fanfic Fan chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
You know, I always thought that Lightning/Caius would just be ridiculus, but you managed to make it work! I commend you!
| Mirage352 chapter 25 . 12/17/2012
This is an awesome fic! I've been searching for a good Lightning/Caius story for a while, and this one definitely drew me in. I found that you portrayed all of the characters very well, especially both Lightning and Caius - their personalities were really in sync and the dialogue was very well written. Plus, you've made the relationship between them really believable - I thought the scene at the end as they observed the stars was so cute! XD (who knew both Lightning and Caius could have a soft side lol)
Again, great work - loved it! :)
| iivogelchen chapter 25 . 12/14/2012
I have recently been obsessed with FF13. So this story was a great find. It had a great flow to it, action packed, full of the romance i wanted. Thank you for such a lovely story. I truly enjoyed it.