Reviews for after the flood
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Another excellent one-shot with some great structure, particularly those isolated "Mitsuhide is" paragraphs. The ones in between are very long, which is not a downright flaw, but if it were mine I'd consider breaking them up a little. Excellent prose, though. Well done x
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
You are so spot on with their personalities. I love every description about mitsuhide and of course, how Kiki narrates all of it. It is very believable. :) this is just the second story I've read from you and I must say I love your writing style already. Make more kikixmitsuhide?

Here's a review as my means of gratitude.
Love Crazed Moron chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
that was a great insight! it was really refreshing and i can totally imagine kiki thinking along those lines! great job :)
ToTrulyBe chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
That was so good! So insightful, and it's lovely to have another Mitsuhide/Kiki story on this website :)
laurose chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Your lovely writing shows these characters deeply and clearly. The last line is great!