|Reviews for His Son|
| iwillcatchyou chapter 3 . 12/15/2013
That's how I see Sasuke as a parent too, somewhat distant, disciplined and demanding on the surface, but actually very caring and loving. He's like a combination of Itachi and his father, great characterization. Naruto is a bit too saintly here for my taste, I don't think Karin cares about Naruto, she's a straight forward sasuke fangirl.
| Lutralutra chapter 3 . 11/27/2013
Aw, this is officially now one of my favourite Naruto/Sasuke friendship stories, which I never thought I'd say considering that Naruto's not even alive in it... but seriously, I just love it. I think you perfectly characterized an older Sasuke interacting with a young child he cares about - he was different from canon, obviously, but it never felt OOC. I love how Aki is able to tell how much Sasuke cares about him (and his father) even through Sasuke's denial and surliness...he's definitely Naruto's son :) And the scene where he meets Naruto in the sorta-afterlife is just beautiful; how they go back to old ways of interacting without missing a beat even though it's been so long and one of them is dead, and yet the love is so there and so felt. It was a wonderful moment when Sasuke said, "Grow up to be just like your father" - I think that totally is what he would want, no matter how much he pretended he'd tried for the opposite. I only discovered this story a few days ago and I've already reread it more times than I can count - so much love for this fic!
| ougley chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
| TKM chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
What a very lovely story.
| rebecca chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
Really sweet. I want another installment, 20 years from now?
| inayen chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
gahh... how could youwrite like this? it's like straight out of a novel :) well, you are an author so i wont argue :p thank you for this beautiful fanfiction :) an insight on how life would be:)
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
| SrtaSolaria chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
Awwwnnnn, that was the sweetest fic I've read in a while! You're a great writer, it was nice reading a different side of your writing! Really amazing!
| Maria Antonieta chapter 3 . 7/21/2013
This fic is so cool! I love the way you writte Sasuke! I can imagine him and the little Aki! The best part was the meet with Naruto. "It's like a party" I can imagine heaven like this, specially if Naruto is there! haha
I loved this fanfiction, it touch my heart! *-* Thank you for have written it!
| hopeless mitsuki chapter 3 . 6/17/2013
Ok it was an absolitly beautiful story and i love the name of akiyoshi! In my opinion it is à really fitted name for an uzumaki's child much more original than "aki" jin " hitomi or What ever else i ve saw .
Also i m crying like a baby because the characters are just so in! It is like kishimoto himself have been writing it...the scene with the lake was wonderful and shit i felt the ache Sasuke feels and ...i loved the bath'scene with aki chan in chapter 1 i laughed so hard at that image of akiyoshi'butt so adorable sitting on Sasuke 'tigh ...and i can not forget the moment where aki chan is exasperated with Sasuke lack of imagination ...well i don't know if What i said make any sense but it was so wonderful that i don't have the right words ...anyway thanks à lot...take carences
| CrimsonWing67 chapter 3 . 6/14/2013
Ok. I'm crying now. This is wonderful oneshot. :')
| lum85 chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
When I began reading I thought "Oh, this is too precious! This will only end with me in tears I bet". And It did. Especially in the 3rd chapter. But the ending was very sweet.
| DemonFoxZaku chapter 3 . 2/21/2013
I absolutely loved this fic so far, it is extremely well written and very few grammatical/spelling errors.
Everyone felt in character and the story feels like it flows beautifully.
If you read the manga, the current story arc is incredible. Especially for fan fiction writers. It just opens up the genre for SO much more. I hope you are still writing!
I will be diligently following you as your fan! :) Keep up the good work my friend.
I cried when reading parts of this. You are a very talented writer.
| Sab chapter 3 . 2/5/2013
Absolutely stunning! I haven't found any recent cannon fics so this was a treat and a half. You write very realistically, the scene with Naruto being, ironically, the most tangible of them all. I could literally see those reflections within his eyes of the sunset. Gorgeous attention to detail there, but not so much that the pace is lost. Thank you, a very heartfelt thank you, for writing this x
| shell chapter 3 . 12/25/2012
absolutely beautiful. i loved this. aki is very similar to naruto so of course sasuke would love him, sasuke was just being adamant about not feeling anything for the done XD