Reviews for Leaving for a Family
DarkRavie chapter 30 . 5/25/2014
Great chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.
Dark Ace Raven chapter 29 . 5/2/2014
*Mimic's a frog croaking* The frogs daughter and tony should break up like in the show.


Dark Ace Raven
willowskeith chapter 29 . 4/30/2014
good story so far.
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 9 . 4/23/2014
Im pretty sure its antHony, and i know its Abby scuito, and Timothy mcgee
DaughterofDante chapter 29 . 4/15/2014
Oh. My. God. That was amazing! Please continue this!
quaff chapter 8 . 4/12/2014
I have trouble believing that Jenny would give everyone time off to see Harry. I'm enjoying your story. Ta.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 29 . 3/28/2014
Very nice, I particularly enjoyed how the episodes of the show was brought in! Your grammar's slightly off. but not too badly. I look forward to what you do next
ctc chapter 29 . 3/27/2014
Jd chapter 13 . 3/23/2014
Pfff...ur story is great in the idea, but, harry seams have 5 instead of 14, harry is always a loner, he need to be more mature, no more young, more independent, remember he runaway in his 13 years.

I was havig good time reading it, but in each chapter harry was going more and more backwards, i supose when the story is finish harry will need ziva to change his diappers.
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 29 . 3/20/2014
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Harry should get kidnapped by one of Gibbs enemies.
Phoenix Warehouse Productions chapter 8 . 3/19/2014
I still say you SHOULD pair Harry an Ziva
TxA-GunFighter chapter 30 . 3/18/2014

TxA-GunFighter chapter 29 . 3/18/2014
Good chapter. Harry needs to get a grip.

TxA-GunFighter chapter 28 . 3/18/2014
Good one.

TxA-GunFighter chapter 27 . 3/18/2014
Outstanding, good chapter to a great story.

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