Reviews for Leaving for a Family
foxee-chik chapter 33 . 9/20/2015
Wow! Keep goin! I liked it! I can't w8 2 read the nxt chap!
ric castle chapter 33 . 9/20/2015
Awesome Job! I wonder if Harry is going to the Library to get books on Wars In History?
Hubler99 chapter 2 . 9/19/2015
love it perfect:)
Hubler99 chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
wow ok I love just love this chapter it was great ! :)
ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 33 . 9/19/2015
I loved loved loved loved loved was great.
god of all chapter 33 . 9/19/2015
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story
serenityselena chapter 33 . 9/19/2015
oh my... things are not easy for poor Harry...
hopefully they will soon find out why he is always so tired...
looking forward to reading more :)
ElementalMaster16 chapter 33 . 9/19/2015
nice chapter!

geetac chapter 33 . 9/18/2015
It's a nice chapter
Jostanos chapter 33 . 9/18/2015
Apology accepted, Hime. :)

There are a few grammar/vocabulary errors in this chapter, but nothing too major.
It would be nice if you would fix them, but it may also be a good idea to see if anyone else also finds any before doing so. :)

I am glad that the situation between Harry and Richard has been resolved, and that Gibbs has taken both Harry and Aiden to the Smithsonian.

Please continue when you may, Princess.
dogman999 chapter 33 . 9/18/2015
Keep up the good work.
Rizarora chapter 33 . 9/18/2015
Good chapter. GOOD LUCK WITH UNI
deenara2000 chapter 33 . 9/18/2015
good so far. more please
guest comment chapter 33 . 9/18/2015
Good story but you ned to work on grammar or find a good beta. You SHOULD use HE and Harry not "him and Harry" also when talking about more than one person such as Sirus and Remus use the word ARE not is. Overall score Acceptable but with grammar corrections could work up to Exceeds Expectations
Mumia0813 chapter 6 . 9/18/2015
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