Reviews for The Family Business
Nerdyesque chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Creepy, yet strangely...right. I can actually see them doing this, though I suspect Dean would fight really hard to keep Sam out, at least until Sam goes out to get his own customer. Good, bad, or indifferent they are a team. And I think it's better you used present tense because it brings the reader directly into the situation instead of distancing them as it would with past tense.
Bethan1996SPN chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
That was very touching :') Very well written, well done :D
Souless666 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Well that was different. Nicely written I must say.
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
good one!