Reviews for A piece of Heaven
BAdFanFicTIONrighter99 chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
aww that was so cute i loved it
big glee famanic chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
Thank you for making Fred and Sirius live!
Arkeisios chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
hey you. yeah you. have you ever stepped on a piece of gum and then it got stuck on your shoe and no matter what you do you cant get it off your tread and you just have to walk around with a dirty piece of gum that was in someones mouth collecting saliva and spit and germs and gross stuff and now its on your shoe collecting dirt and hair and pieces of trash from the ground like a suction cup? have you ever experienced that? you know how horrible it is right? well. let me tell you. this fic is worse than that piece of dirty, unrecognizable gum on the bottom of your trusty faithful shoe. its worse. first of, its glaringly ooc- so much that it physically hurts to read. the grammar errors are worse than my third grade essays. what is miranda potter how did you get miranda is it some fanciful name you were inspired to choose why did you choose miranda there is nothing resembling harry potter in this miranda person you made up. nothing. its not even ooc anymore its just pure oc. please for the love of all that is wonderful and high speed wifi capitalize your titles have you heard of capitalization dear god almighty this is like a trashy novel my mother would read good job you just need an editor and you can publish the next generation of sappy romance novels

but at least you tried. thats probably the most important thing. you are a part of the fandom and this is your contribution, your mark on the archive- that i can appreciate. so i guess, sorry for the above but i feel its necessary. think of it as horrible cruel constructive criticism- good effort! C as a whole because i think we all need more femharry/fred ships and its sweet if you can ignore all the blatant discrepancies i guess (which is probably only possible if youre blind but hey this evidently pleased some people so what can i say i guess my standards are higher than most) take a grammar class in your free time some day ok just as a favor to humanity as a whole thanks
ptl4ever419 chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Love it, very well written :)
Lolxxx chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Well I liked it, if that's any consolation for your ego ;)

Fred and fem Harry ftw