Well done

I keep reading this over and over. For your first try it was very well written. The characters felt in character. Penny's thought process flowed through naturally and seemed like something that would actually happened. They both have such intimate moments like this and it just leaves one wondering... Thank you for sharing.

I know it's been a while since you wrote this, but I'm following your story, just in case... Beautifully written.

This was beautiful! The ending was...it definitely left a kick, and a sour taste in my mouth. Not because it was terrible...it was perfect actually, but it left me wanting more.

Wonderful. 3 Shenny is hard to pull off well, but you did it beautifully. They are so perfectly in-character.

I enjoyed it very much. More please.

I love this story! I wish it would go down this way in the series.

Sweet))))

Write more? They're adorable!

just found this today I think it's a great piece and would love to see the continuation of said love story

thanks for sharing your talent

Rose

Good Job!

I really liked this! It definitely doesn't seem like it's your first try. I think you did a great job with the characters - I could totally hear their voices in my head as I was reading! I'd love to read some more!

That was adorable and I kinda want more :)

Great beginning, more please :)

Very good, very good. And I like the How I Met Your Mother stuff.

More.

Rate: A