Reviews for The Right Man |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's nicely done, but it feels kind of... unfinished. Not too polished, just a single scene, like something or rather a lot is missing. Maybe you could extend it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute! And very true to the characters! Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was delightful. Perfect amount of humor and poignancy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love the way your writing it, it fits with the characters. Update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love the way your writing it, it fits with the characters. Update soon? |
![]() ![]() *speechless* oh my GOD!:D sweetie I have no words of criticism in me right now cause it feels as if you've been writing these two for years!:O I'm EXTREMELY impressed by this and I truly do hope that you plan on continuing this cause this is too good better yet AMAZING!:D you handled those two so well and had them in perfect character! You're vocabulary and way of grammar is phenomenal and I'm in love with your style if writing and the way you write the emotion between those two as well I also LOVE 'How I Met Your Mother' I was just as broken hearted and frustrated as Penny was with Robin! You've also described how handsome Sheldon really is too;D lol I love if when you write in Penny's POV now let's see how you do it with Moonpie's! Update soon please I truly do hope that this isn't a one shot or something:( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that was beautiful and the last line. *aww* Please write more. :) *favs* |
![]() ![]() this was great for a first fic! i like it so much i think a one-shot isnt enough! ahahhahah maybe a multi-fic is in your future, my dear! looking forward to anything else you might write! happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start. I loved the reference to Penny's Age of Conan marathon. Hope to see more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story had a lovely premise was written extremely well but it needs to be expanded on |
![]() ![]() ![]() So how is the wrong man going to become the right on? Can't wait to find out! |