|Reviews for Guardian|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
| puion chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
I just discovered your TIVA fics today, and I just can't stop reading!
Your TIVA are just so good, so wonderful, so realistic!
Thanks so much for writing!
| Amilyn chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
This? This is fantastic. I love LOVE the pacing, how Ziva surprised me (and Tony) by confirming that, yes, she thinks he should get his own team...and then springs that she wants marriage and children and that she thinks they can have that life together better if they don't work together. I love the gap time before Tony comments similarly and Ziva focusing in on his acknowledgement that, yes, he wants children with her. I love the lovely, teasing, playful bit of Tony saying he wants to be the one to propose...and Ziva saying "We'll see." And the lovely discussion of sons and daughters and fathers, with Tony's realization taht Gibbs finds them, searches for them, takes care of them BECAUSE he's a dad...and has lost kids. I love that Ziva reassures Tony that she believes absolutely that he'll be able to support and find and help their kids...and that tony realizes it's time to believe in himself the way she already does...and to work on that before they have kids. This is really REALLY excellent.
| Canada Dakota Faith Haswari chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Loo on the shut it both of you and get in the dam car
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Perfect piece as always. Great work :) thank you for it
| Chloris chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Marvellous! As always, your writing makes me smile. I love that you managed to address Tony's conflicting loyalty and ambition and his lack of confidence in himself; I find most people tend to go way overboard on one or more of those points, but I think you balanced them very well.
| jsq chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This one is going on the "favorites" list. I might have melted a bit when Tony realized why Gibbs is always attuned to their distress. Great story, with just enough humor.
| Aveo amacus chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Absolutely loved this
Oh how I wish this would happen on the show (and over here in the UK we've just started season 8 and I know we're in for some dark days).
Great characterisations as well as the relationship between Ziva and Tony here. Great to see Tony working through his issues and Ziva supporting him - both generally and through the specific issues. Loved the idea of them wanting to build a life together
| AliyahNCIS chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
This was fabulous! I'm glad they got to have a serious talk. Geez, Tony freaks out a lot when he's not saying stuff out loud so people can try to talk him out of it.
I loved everything from Ziva spelling out what she wants, to Tony's revelation that Gibbs is acting like a dad, to Ziva telling him that she knows he would move heaven and earth for their kids and would know when they need him. That she almost cried was very sweet.
I hate the thought of them on separate teams, but if it helps them get to happily ever after, by all means let's to it! Brilliantly written, I absolutely love your stories. Thanks! :)
| DaniSJ chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
I wonder every time how you manage to make the most unlikely scenarios work... great job!
| Aliyah-7 chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Woah! This is the first T/Z fanfic I read (I had been searching today and this one called my attention).
I really loved it! Everything was in-character and well written. I really liked how you managed everything. My fav part was when Tony found out Gibbs' father instincs. It was so cute!
Must read the rest of your work, definitely!
| Mm.Mystery chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
This very good. I love it. :)
| Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Awww, perfectly lovely. As always, your characterizations are impeccable. Thanks for sharing!
| I. M. Frelling-Wonko chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Oh wow. I really liked that. And I mean REALLY liked it. Great job once again.
| diana teo chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I'm lost for words...oooh,found some...You've outdone yourself with this brilliant,sparkling gem! I LOVE YOU for writing this beautiful piece! The balance of angst,introspection,banter,understanding and tenderness had me cheering them on... :)