Reviews for Grayscale
elliott ashes chapter 3 . 5/27/2012
I never thought about why he didn't like leeks. I love how you picked up on that detail and explained it. I really like the way you pick up on Kyo's thought process too, such as him thinking that bed was boring, and him wanting to please Kazuma.

The use of repetition in the last line is also well done.

I'm looking forward to reading more!
elliott ashes chapter 2 . 5/27/2012
Love the details in this, especially the ones in parentheses. The minimalist style works really effectively for emphasis. There's a lot of subtle emotion in your writing that comes through very well.
elliott ashes chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I really like this. It's definitely in character and insightful. I love these kind of details. I'm excited to read more!
XxGunsxAndxRoses13xX chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
This is truly amazing!
snipits42 chapter 3 . 4/22/2012
It is really good, I like how everything ends the same way.
LostOneLawliet chapter 2 . 4/20/2012
After my absence, I came back to find that I missed your writing so much. I love your interpretations of Kyo, as always, and the way you touch on little subjects and bring them into a different light. Please continue soon. :)
YokaiHeart chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
Once again another great chapter. I still think it strange that cats can't taste sweets. Maybe that's why they don't complain about their food O.o

Keep up the good work :)
YokaiHeart chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Interesting idea. I love little Kyo! Looking forward to future chapters :)