I'm afraid that this $hit will bite them in the arse., And I'm not talking about the Deers gifts.

Ho my god I think I just came !
(Flushed and eyes wide)
Where you sign up for private lessons ?

In my country there is a saying When a person flooding with talking : "You ate my head."
My inner self shouted this on Sakura at least ten times.

There is a girl
Angielove111 on wattpad that is telling the people she made this history

Sorry for my English but it is not my native language. Ok, this story was just wonderful but I think the time factor was a problem for several. However, I'm going to pretend that this drama didn't just happen in one day, but in my mind it will be weeks and months jhahaha. It was a wonderful read, the way you portrayed Shikamaru was breathtaking.
There are many fanfics that portray Sakura's personality very well, but not so with Shikamaru. Everyone sees him as a lazy, genius sloth and rather portrays him as an indifferent personality, but he is more than that and I really liked the way you brought out every layer of him. Ty so much for this fic, I really enjoy it.

when i first read this, i was not expecting a marriage ending at all. the quality of this was rly good, i think it was well paced too. i feel really satisfied now, thanks!

I hope that you're doing ok. Your work and intelligence is fantastic and I wish we could read more of it. Thank you.

This was a wonderful story. I loved how you wrote Shikamaru, it's the best written character portrait about him that I have read so far.

Thank you.

This chapter was so fun!

Thank you.

The daily opera LOL! And so true about now all the other guys having to step up their game now :)

Oh my God I don't know where to begin this chapter was so funny I think I got abs from it, thanks!

Wow their relationship moved really really quick!

I absolutely adored this story! There's isn't much ShikaSaku content out there, and a lot of it even seems very...unlikely and OOC. I love this and I think you nailed the dynamic and character so well. It seemed so realistic. I honestly think my favorite moment is when Sakura hears him and Ino talking, you wrote that climax so well and made the drama of the moment so intense. I always love a story that sends me on a rollercoaster of emotions. I truly enjoyed the plot, however your writing style made it come together and flow perfectly.

so my final thoughts are i really liked the story but i just wished it was more slowed down. its crazy to think that this story took place over a course of a day literally one day, from night day night. its just hard for me to believe that they were in a relationship for what 5 hrs and then later that day they become engaged? but other than that i enjoyed the ride.

Second read through of this and I still love it! I just wish there were more! I’d love to see their life play out!