|Reviews for The Past The Present and The Future|
| Supabec chapter 16 . 10/11/2013
| tiefseelaterne chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I was obsessed with this story! So great! Keep on writing! :)
| kylar.is.mine chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
This is great! Wow i really needed a good ending for the tribe in which amber and bray got together and thankyou so much for writing one. It was perfect!
| Mostly chapter 16 . 8/21/2012
I know this story is done and probably old news for you but I've just had time to sit down and catch up on reviewing. I loved this story. You've made me really like Bray, which is so alien to me, I usually went for Lex (great job with him, too!) or even Luke. The weird thing is, I don't think you changed him much from his canon characterization. It's just that for once, we got a proper look into his head. He's always seemed walled off to me, so well done there!
Amber I've always liked, so there's no big revelation there. I was still really glad to read a story where she isn't secretly evil or horrible.
The real thing that made me just want to squee, and will make me re-read this like crazy, is that you played the love triangle out so perfectly. It's just how I thought Bray/Amber/Jay would go in a series 6 scenario, and you did it with a lot of care to keep everyone easy to relate to and interesting.
And yes, the Ebony stuff had me on the edge of my seat too.
Thanks for posting this!
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/6/2012
WOW! literally when i finished reading this, i let out the biggest sigh! AMAZING! I LOVE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING! and the way you reunited Bray and Amber in this chapter is just amazing! If you ever decide to publish a book, I would definetley buy it! INCREDIBLE!
| madgirl22 chapter 16 . 8/5/2012
Yay! The ending did not disappoint me and I loved how consistently you seem to have written the main characters throughout the fic. Well done!
| monchichi chapter 16 . 8/5/2012
Great great great! Honestly, I just love this whole story and your writing style and of course, most of all, ... the end! Of course, as I said before, I can't deny that on the one hand, it is cheesy and the romance often overstated - but in some stories, you simply don't care about that and so, on the other hand, it isn't overstated at all... The best example for that is your story! :D
I hope there'll be more of you to read... I'm sad it's over now, but it was fun to read! Thanks for writing! :)
| jelly snakes chapter 15 . 8/3/2012
Love this fanfic! im looking forward to the epilogue, and i hope its a happy ending, preferably with Amber and Bray together because im a sucker for that sort of thing :D
| katy1986 chapter 15 . 8/2/2012
Yay Jay has stopped being a douche...
Loved the update x
| jelly snakes chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
awesome job, i hope there's more!
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/28/2012
Great chapter! love whats happening and I really cant wait until the next chapter, I really love your style of writing! Keep up the amazing work!
| madgirl22 chapter 15 . 7/28/2012
Another great chapter. I was slightly worried that you might not make the Jamber break up true to their characters but you've done it perfectly. Can't wait for the end!
| Archangel chapter 14 . 7/26/2012
Love it :D Great work :D
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/24/2012
Wow! That was a really good chapter, I loved it, this would have to be my favourite fan fiction and I love your style of writing! Keep up the amazing work!
| madgirl22 chapter 14 . 7/23/2012
Thanks for updating so quickly. I'm glad you included Emma in the storyline because I'm sure she'll be included in it in the next book. Great chapter.