Reviews for Bated Breath
Guest chapter 64 . 8/30
Did a re-read and so worth the time.
Thank you for writing such a great and twisty tale!
Jokin chapter 64 . 6/27
Read this again for second time. so good. You write them true to chapter and we thank you for that. it's been awhile so can we please have another Castle story soon? Please
Guest chapter 31 . 6/21
I am loving reading your beautiful story and this chapter was the icing on the cake so far. I know you wrote this long ago and I am so fortunate to have found it. I can't wait to read the rest of this journey.
wendykw chapter 18 . 4/12
Love all the sci-fi references.
wendykw chapter 17 . 4/12
I'm doing a reread, and just had to add a comment about the inventiveness of the three arm kid banter. Love it.
Anon chapter 23 . 3/21
Thank You ‼️
Vishw chapter 14 . 3/12
Really?! If he was in danger by just being in her proximity why did she seek him out after coming back, knowing that he'd follow her like the loyal puppy he is?! Was the danger over then?! If not, then how was she planning to protect him when she couldn't protect herself?!
Sue Michler chapter 31 . 2/16
This chapter is so, so beautifully written. This would have been perfect on the show and would have been awesome to watch as well. I am so glad I found this story! Thanks again for taking time to write it.
Sue Michler chapter 10 . 2/9
Lydian,
I found this story this morning and started to read it. I have to tell you that Chapter 10 is so beautifully written and the story itself is fantastic. I will continue to read it today and I just wanted to stop for a few minutes and thank you for writing it. I can't believe I never saw this story before.
GT500RonSmith chapter 64 . 1/21
I happy to have found you as a writer thanks to my friend Garrae. I've enjoyed this story very much and intend to go through the rest of your Castle work. I hope you are doing well these days, it you ever get around to reading these reviews!

Thank you!
GT500RonSmith chapter 63 . 1/21
So, the drool was the key?

It was a good read.
GT500RonSmith chapter 62 . 1/21
Father and son bonding nicely! As it should be.
GT500RonSmith chapter 61 . 1/21
Okay, that's pretty special having him hold on until his son wants him to come back. I like it.
GT500RonSmith chapter 60 . 1/21
Good end to it all and Castle is calling Sutton his father!
GT500RonSmith chapter 59 . 1/20
Well, hell! What about Maddox? I hope someone at least killed that SOB!
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