Reviews for Bated Breath |
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![]() ![]() Did a re-read and so worth the time. Thank you for writing such a great and twisty tale! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read this again for second time. so good. You write them true to chapter and we thank you for that. it's been awhile so can we please have another Castle story soon? Please |
![]() ![]() I am loving reading your beautiful story and this chapter was the icing on the cake so far. I know you wrote this long ago and I am so fortunate to have found it. I can't wait to read the rest of this journey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love all the sci-fi references. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm doing a reread, and just had to add a comment about the inventiveness of the three arm kid banter. Love it. |
![]() ![]() Thank You ‼️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really?! If he was in danger by just being in her proximity why did she seek him out after coming back, knowing that he'd follow her like the loyal puppy he is?! Was the danger over then?! If not, then how was she planning to protect him when she couldn't protect herself?! |
![]() ![]() This chapter is so, so beautifully written. This would have been perfect on the show and would have been awesome to watch as well. I am so glad I found this story! Thanks again for taking time to write it. |
![]() ![]() Lydian, I found this story this morning and started to read it. I have to tell you that Chapter 10 is so beautifully written and the story itself is fantastic. I will continue to read it today and I just wanted to stop for a few minutes and thank you for writing it. I can't believe I never saw this story before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I happy to have found you as a writer thanks to my friend Garrae. I've enjoyed this story very much and intend to go through the rest of your Castle work. I hope you are doing well these days, it you ever get around to reading these reviews! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, the drool was the key? It was a good read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Father and son bonding nicely! As it should be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, that's pretty special having him hold on until his son wants him to come back. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good end to it all and Castle is calling Sutton his father! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, hell! What about Maddox? I hope someone at least killed that SOB! |