|Reviews for Bated Breath|
| Disneynut chapter 64 . 2/28
Fantastic story! Had a horrible time putting it down at night and again in the morning before work. I was almost late on a few occasions.
I do have a question, was Judge Markway really a bad guy or just a unknowing pawn?
| Disneynut chapter 34 . 2/26
Really enjoying this soft side of Kate!
| satheo2013 chapter 64 . 2/22
really enjoyed this story! you're excellent writer even though you glossed over the 'finally' official getting together point, I hope you keep writing!
| satheo2013 chapter 55 . 2/22
That was a well thought out back story. good job
| Terry chapter 14 . 2/5
Your story is incredible and so well crafted. I am really hooked and can't wait to read more.
| DanaPod chapter 34 . 2/3
I really like the one-shots. Sometimes it's fun to jump around to the highlights of life instead of trudging through a single story, although your Part I was great so I am equally excited for Part III. I like how you can communicate so much love and trust through such a simple act as washing hair. That scene seemed much more intimate than you might expect.
| DanaPod chapter 29 . 1/29
Really wish this scene would have made it into the show. It would have been nice to see Castle have a normal father-son dynamic with someone as opposed to the cloak-and-dagger routine he gets with his dad. I'd love more family scenes with both parents.
I'm guessing you wrote that bit about Ryan naming his kid Javier way before the episode aired that showed the baby's birth. Made me laugh knowing that would have been the kid's name had it been a boy. How insightful!
| DanaPod chapter 24 . 1/27
The humor and banter is spot-on. I was laughing out loud when Castle made up his poem and Beckett said she thought Patterson could do better. Wish I could write joke this well.
| DanaPod chapter 23 . 1/27
The paragraph that begins with "But it wasn't the end of their story" was amazing. I read it multiple times. Love how you compare their journey to a written story, seems very appropriate. And then how you bring it back to the strings in the apartment. It completely captures how Beckett's story is so driven by her past, but if she keeps following those strings, they also lead to her future. So very poetic!
| DanaPod chapter 8 . 1/24
Love love love the line about how the two closest relationships in her life were mutually exclusive. Never thought about it that way for some reason. And the Wicked reference was fun since I am a huge musical nut.
| DanaPod chapter 7 . 1/24
I like how quickly you keep the story moving forward without cutting out details. Makes for a compelling read.
| DanaPod chapter 5 . 1/24
Really like how you describe Alexis' POV and feelings toward Beckett post season 4.
| Castlelover777 chapter 64 . 1/24
What a great story! It was wonderful that you had it all planned ahead of time, as I think that made the story flow and not wander. Thanks again for writing such a nice long and well written story!
| NotYetLostFaith chapter 64 . 1/19
Wow. That was, breath-taking. I found this just a few days ago and haven't been able to not read whenever I had a spare minute. Thank you so much for this, it was extraordinary and I adored it. I cannot wait to read more from you. NYLF xx
| HorseGirl112 chapter 28 . 1/16
Are you a psychic or something? The whole thing about whether you could name an Irish boy Javier is hilarious considering January 6ths episode! I LOVE the story by the way