Reviews for Bated Breath |
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![]() ![]() I've read this story several times now and it is always enjoyable even though I know what's coming, a bit disappointed you didn't finish Room to Breathe. Won't be watching the S8 finale so it doesn't sour my memories of the show and puts me off watching reruns and reading fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a story you wrote. I like how Kate, James and everyone is having a very good time. Congrats on a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice wrap up of this story; good job as always :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've loved the story and read it multiple times. I was just wondering if this reappearance means your going to continue room to breathe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've enjoyed the story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm giving this story a re-read, because it's definitely one of my favourites. And I'm remembering why, with each revelation and every line. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story! One of the best I've read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the third time I've searched for, and read, this story. Definitely one of my favorites! Any way I can download and print it out, so I can take traveling with me to read? Love your work! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this fanfiction! thankyou for writing it although I'm reading it some years later! thankyou! |
![]() ![]() Wow, first part over for me...your writing is so fluent and easy, it makes reading this story to a fast progess, without the reader noticing. I draw my head and read on :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I'll say it backwards: Wow! Reading this has taken all day and I've won the "worthless award" because of it but I couldn't stop! So well plotted, characterized, written, etc! I can't think of enough superlatives so the overuse of exclamation points will have to do. Thank you so much for sharing your talents and efforts with the rest of us! I so look forward to reading more of your work, but I'll have to plan based on chapter count :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great story from beginning to end. Excellent bookend scenes in the water! I enjoyed so many things about this story. Thank you for not killing Rick's dad. This was wonderfully plotted and written. I am somewhat nervous when I see really long stories like this, as they often start out fantastic and then either veer off course, or even worse, stay unfinished. So thanks for sharing an exciting, heart warming story that is so well written. I hope you are continuing to write, as I have been thoroughly enjoying your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooh, this is getting so exciting! Loving it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great yarn by Rick, and you, obviously. Really well put together. |