Reviews for Bated Breath
GT500RonSmith chapter 13 . 1/17/2022
Kate is so weak! And worried that Castle disapproves of her her scars, when he was only saddened that she had to carry them, not turned away by them.

Alexis is trying very hard bring this very potential family happily together. Kate sees her effort and respects her for it. Their love will grow from it.
GT500RonSmith chapter 12 . 1/17/2022
Preserve that moment because it means the same thing. He just told her again in different words.
GT500RonSmith chapter 11 . 1/17/2022
Her gentle touches, the smoothing of his hair, does she realize the gifts that she's giving him?
GT500RonSmith chapter 10 . 1/17/2022
He has so much love for her that she has to feel it no matter what her stress is.
GT500RonSmith chapter 9 . 1/17/2022
I agree, she couldn't be any hotter!
GT500RonSmith chapter 8 . 1/17/2022
He manages to let Kate get a short nap. It seems to have rejuvenated her.
GT500RonSmith chapter 7 . 1/17/2022
Kate's not really well and Lanie has Castle on it. So he's sweet-talked her into staying with her at the loft where he can look after her. I think that's exactly what she needs.
GT500RonSmith chapter 6 . 1/17/2022
Castle is not likely to even understand that Kate could be jealous. Now, he's just hurt.
GT500RonSmith chapter 5 . 1/17/2022
She's made a huge commitment for their happiness. For all of them.
GT500RonSmith chapter 4 . 1/17/2022
Glad that Alexis knows the truth and she doesn't seem too awfully mad at Kate right now.
GT500RonSmith chapter 3 . 1/17/2022
Life guard as a teenager to pursue a girl! Great explanation for his ability to get Kate to safety. And of course, there's Baywatch.
GT500RonSmith chapter 2 . 1/17/2022
How terrified must he have been when he got them to the surface and Kate wasn't breathing? Keeping them both afloat and clearing her lungs with mouth-to-mouth. Frantic, but he saved the life of the love of his life! Nice!
GT500RonSmith chapter 1 . 1/17/2022
So well written! Saddest thing ever to read Kate's last thoughts. But, Castle has her now. She'll be okay.
thatfantasyworldofmine chapter 23 . 11/29/2021
Latecomer to the Castle fandom here. Absolutely LOVING this story so far. You're a fantastic writer who has each character nailed perfectly. Thank you!
castle2824 chapter 1 . 10/27/2021
I know it has a few years since you finished this story (thanks by the way) but I would like to commend you on such a well thought out story. You really got into the mindset of each character. I really loved this story. Thanks again.
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