Reviews for Bated Breath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() decided to send you a review since you asked so nicely. even though this story was written a long time ago, I had to write to tell you how terrific it is. this is my second time reading it, which tells you how much I enjoyed it. thank you for writing this. I just wish you had finished the sequel. looking forward to my second time through part II. onward! |
![]() ![]() Wow. Just finished this story, I saved it last year and finally had some time to read it through. This was awesomely written - the characters were fantasy and I loved all the little things you did to make the story your own. Really fantastic, thank you! PS - I'm glad you didn't kill off Sutton too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Castles Dad being there! This is a great story and you are a great writer! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this story. I love AU's when they're done well and this one definition nicely was. And btw, I agree with Rick and Alexis. There were only 8 seasons of SG-1. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished reading this entire story again and loved it all over again. You really did a great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am late to the party in reading your story but I must tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed it. So much that is it now 1:40 am and I just finished it. I loved it and even though the show has ended, reading this story made me feel as though everything was as it should have been. I haven't checked to see how many other Castle stories you've written, but when I wake up later in the day, I will be checking. Thank you for brightening my day and I hope you continue to write whether it is Castle or some other story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Much better ending than the show. I also liked that you had Kate and Alexis have a relationship I never felt that they explored it very well in the show. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My heart did skip several beats when I saw the update. I'm so far behind on reading. half a yearbut I do hope this finds you well. sending all the hugs xoxo |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story very much. It brought the characters to life. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() Thank you for the wedding. I always wanted Ryan, Espisito and Lanier to be at the wedding! |
![]() ![]() This is such a marvelous story. You are bringing the characters alive for me. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() hello I just read your story and I loved it It was fun and good written. good luck |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing, thank you for the journey |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just came across this story, and it is amazing. Losing Castle every Monday will be tough, but stories like this will help it live on in our irrational hearts :). I look forward to reading the rest |