Reviews for The Scranton Regional Manager Race
JackLwiu130 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
The characters seem like they say all of these things and I think that's the best part about the short story, because I can imagine all them saying these things, I also liked the ending because its bring Michael back into the story and we all could use a little bit of that. The only thing I believe needs to be worked on is the story detail it was hard to imagine where they were in the officer. other then that I thought it was a good story
Lloyd Gross chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Very interesting topic. You should continue with the idea and make more chapters. This is a story you could take in a million different directions. Nicely written. You stayed true to the characters' personalities. I love how at the end you threw in Michael. Overall, great job.
sudoku chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Great start of the story and sounded promising! It's too bad most stories now mostly deal with older seasons as people don't enjoy new season that much.
jessie 33 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Great start to your story, oh I would love for Michael to return , I miss him. ")