|Reviews for The Scranton Regional Manager Race|
| JackLwiu130 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
The characters seem like they say all of these things and I think that's the best part about the short story, because I can imagine all them saying these things, I also liked the ending because its bring Michael back into the story and we all could use a little bit of that. The only thing I believe needs to be worked on is the story detail it was hard to imagine where they were in the officer. other then that I thought it was a good story
| Lloyd Gross chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Very interesting topic. You should continue with the idea and make more chapters. This is a story you could take in a million different directions. Nicely written. You stayed true to the characters' personalities. I love how at the end you threw in Michael. Overall, great job.
| sudoku chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Great start of the story and sounded promising! It's too bad most stories now mostly deal with older seasons as people don't enjoy new season that much.
| jessie 33 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Great start to your story, oh I would love for Michael to return , I miss him. ")