|Reviews for Halo: A New Age|
| Hachichiyyin chapter 2 . 16h ago
You need to proofread your chapters. There are plenty of grammatical mistakes. A beta could help you with that.
Your dialogues sound dry. Show don't tell.
| Eien Michi chapter 7 . 2/28
Wow, there's a huge quality leap in so few chapters.
| Eien Michi chapter 2 . 2/28
Bit overused plot, tho the OSA is interesting and original. Lots of typos, and comma is underused. I'll keep reading, it seems like an interesting story.
| PageOfMind chapter 2 . 2/17
I agree with a plasticspoon. The grammer could use some work but the spelling is fine, and the plot is great
| HonorGuardElite chapter 5 . 2/16
I really like you story
| Samuel chapter 2 . 2/16
| Guest chapter 24 . 2/9
| CrazyMan2200 chapter 5 . 1/29
| The Demogorgon chapter 12 . 1/13
That would make him 2 feet taller than Shepard 6,2 adding two inches makes it 6,4.
| aplasticspoon chapter 4 . 12/31/2013
Honestly, it's obviously heavily beta-d by a lot of people, but still your writing and grammar clearly shows that both are still just plain maliciously atrocious beyond repair.
Like Naruto-fics, the only thing that managed to make up for it is the storyline.
| officerbooty chapter 13 . 12/31/2013
Shepard's a real piece of crap in this story but i love Cerberus and ONI. Im left wondering why Shepard is constantly hindering his allies
| Nanashi113 chapter 34 . 12/31/2013
Awesome story! This made we want to replay all the ME games
| Dp11 chapter 13 . 12/21/2013
Shepard is acting like an idiot. Why would he just act hostile against his own allies even if they are ONI? It's ridiculous and the Spartans don't even say they are humans and shouldn't fight each other.
| Drow79 chapter 34 . 12/20/2013
Great crossover and don't worry I and I think many others would prefer slower chapter updates then quick crap chapters. Looking forward to next update.
| CapitalClassShip chapter 4 . 11/7/2013
Rember that Sangheili have a Special Jetpack that allows them to Fly but this class of enemy was exclusive for Halo 2 and was pretty much forgotten after that.